From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Thomas Ackermann Subject: Aw: Re: [PATCH 05/13] Fix some typos Date: Sun, 25 Aug 2013 11:13:11 +0200 (CEST) Message-ID: <892787868.481320.1377421991470.JavaMail.ngmail@webmail16.arcor-online.net> References: <20130825050159.GH2882@elie.Belkin> <282216171.1090748.1377328932833.JavaMail.ngmail@webmail08.arcor-online.net> <1171853844.1090991.1377329328622.JavaMail.ngmail@webmail08.arcor-online.net> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: git@vger.kernel.org, gitster@pobox.com, wking@tremily.us To: jrnieder@gmail.com, th.acker@arcor.de X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Sun Aug 25 11:13:17 2013 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.180.67]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1VDWNp-0004xX-2B for gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org; Sun, 25 Aug 2013 11:13:17 +0200 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1755908Ab3HYJNN (ORCPT ); Sun, 25 Aug 2013 05:13:13 -0400 Received: from mail-in-04.arcor-online.net ([151.189.21.44]:36199 "EHLO mail-in-04.arcor-online.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1754619Ab3HYJNM (ORCPT ); Sun, 25 Aug 2013 05:13:12 -0400 Received: from mail-in-12-z2.arcor-online.net (mail-in-12-z2.arcor-online.net [151.189.8.29]) by mx.arcor.de (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7FCEAA9D38; Sun, 25 Aug 2013 11:13:11 +0200 (CEST) Received: from mail-in-09.arcor-online.net (mail-in-09.arcor-online.net [151.189.21.49]) by mail-in-12-z2.arcor-online.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 776F42E60C5; Sun, 25 Aug 2013 11:13:11 +0200 (CEST) Received: from webmail16.arcor-online.net (webmail16.arcor-online.net [151.189.8.70]) by mail-in-09.arcor-online.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6E8D7197581; Sun, 25 Aug 2013 11:13:11 +0200 (CEST) X-DKIM: Sendmail DKIM Filter v2.8.2 mail-in-09.arcor-online.net 6E8D7197581 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=simple/simple; d=arcor.de; s=mail-in; t=1377421991; bh=pPWbTIn/ChiMhdwj154Rlt5hYsnGv5lrhUoeW41mqd4=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Message-ID:In-Reply-To:References:Subject: MIME-Version:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding; b=JBs6jYbziBhm7gddNLRL7y5PSbUkxu+rsHar8guF28IHy5BYUae7HkT6SVuNm2O5u CVdw2Flz/LfOggwyMc+oxctb2Dce2ES8VKitmS40dUvIukX+m81rAbSlDN1RPWW5yl U9Irz1cEat6wJy4rCGfJnuDJEOQNQ9WNiUZRM2LY= Received: from [178.7.23.208] by webmail16.arcor-online.net (151.189.8.70) with HTTP (Arcor Webmail); Sun, 25 Aug 2013 11:13:11 +0200 (CEST) In-Reply-To: <20130825050159.GH2882@elie.Belkin> X-ngMessageSubType: MessageSubType_MAIL X-WebmailclientIP: 178.7.23.208 Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: > > > > -Or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a > > +or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a > > I think this reads better with a capital 'O'. (The pedant in me > likes it, too, since a colon ends a sentence.) > > The lowercase 'but' later in this section should perhaps also be > capitalized, since it also starts an independent thought. > > But that may sometimes help you guess which tags come after the > given commit. > I am no native speaker, but I am a little reluctant to start a new sentence with "But" or "Or". > The sentence "So, you can run something like ... then search for a > line that looks like ..." is a sequence of incomplete thoughts. It > could be paraphrased a little to scan better: > > So, if you run something like "git show-branch e05db0fd > v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2" > > $ git show-branch e05db0fd v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2 > ! [e05db... > > then a line like > > + ++ [e05db0fd] Fix warnings in ... > > shows that e05db0fd is reachable from itself, from v1.5.0-rc1, > and from v1.5.0-rc2, and not from v1.5.0-rc0. > OK; thanks! I will add this. > > > > -To see how submodule support works, create (for example) four example > > +To see how submodule support works, create four example > > I'd keep the joke. > I totally missed the joke ... --- Thomas