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From: Jonathan Nieder <jrnieder@uchicago.edu>
To: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Cc: git@vger.kernel.org, "J. Bruce Fields" <bfields@fieldses.org>,
	Olivier Marin <dkr+ml.git@free.fr>,
	Stephan Beyer <s-beyer@gmx.net>
Subject: [PATCH 05/15] git-commit(1): depersonalize description
Date: Thu, 3 Jul 2008 00:13:45 -0500 (CDT)	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <Pine.GSO.4.62.0807030008200.16085@harper.uchicago.edu> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <Pine.GSO.4.62.0807022322380.16085@harper.uchicago.edu>

The intent is to make git-commit(1) feel more like a manual page.  The
change also makes the page four words shorter.

Signed-off-by: Jonathan Nieder <jrnieder@uchicago.edu>
---
 Documentation/git-commit.txt |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-commit.txt b/Documentation/git-commit.txt
index 03594cd..0ac6204 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-commit.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-commit.txt
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ SYNOPSIS
 
 DESCRIPTION
 -----------
-Use 'git commit' to store the current contents of the index in a new
-commit along with a log message describing the changes you have made.
+Stores the current contents of the index in a new commit along
+with a log message from the user describing the changes.
 
 The content to be added can be specified in several ways:
 
-- 
1.5.5.GIT

  parent reply	other threads:[~2008-07-03  7:02 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 40+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2008-06-30 21:56 [PATCH 0/7] Some superficial documentation changes Jonathan Nieder
2008-06-30 22:01 ` [PATCH 1/7] Documentation: fix links to tutorials and other new manual pages Jonathan Nieder
2008-06-30 23:30   ` Christian Couder
2008-06-30 22:05 ` [PATCH 2/7] whitespace fix in Documentation/git-repack.txt Jonathan Nieder
2008-06-30 22:10 ` [PATCH 3/7] Documentation: complicate example of "man git-command" Jonathan Nieder
2008-06-30 23:39   ` Christian Couder
2008-07-01 16:23   ` J. Bruce Fields
2008-07-01 23:54     ` Junio C Hamano
2008-07-02 21:31       ` J. Bruce Fields
2008-07-03  1:45         ` Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03 18:18           ` J. Bruce Fields
2008-07-03  6:06       ` Christian Couder
2008-07-03  7:44         ` Junio C Hamano
2008-06-30 22:15 ` [PATCH 4/7] git-daemon(1): don't assume git-daemon is in /usr/bin Jonathan Nieder
2008-06-30 22:17 ` [PATCH 5/7] Documentation: prepare to be consistent about "git-" versus "git " Jonathan Nieder
2008-06-30 22:29   ` [PATCH 6/7] Documentation: " Jonathan Nieder
2008-06-30 22:36 ` [RFC/PATCH 7/7] Documentation formatting and cleanup Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-01 13:09   ` Olivier Marin
2008-07-01 21:34     ` Junio C Hamano
2008-07-03  2:09       ` Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  2:28     ` Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-01  8:42 ` [PATCH 0/7] Some superficial documentation changes Junio C Hamano
2008-07-03  4:31   ` Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  4:47     ` [PATCH 01/15] git-format-patch(1): fix stray \ in output Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  4:54     ` [PATCH 02/15] Documentation: fix gitlinks Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:03     ` [PATCH 03/15] manpages: fix bogus whitespace Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03 23:55       ` Junio C Hamano
2008-07-04  1:14         ` Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:08     ` [PATCH 04/15] git(1): add comma Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:13     ` Jonathan Nieder [this message]
2008-07-03  5:20     ` [PATCH 06/15] Documentation: rewrap to prepare for "git-" vs "git " change Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:28     ` [PATCH 07/15] Documentation: more "git-" versus "git " changes Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:30     ` [PATCH 08/15] gitdiffcore(7): fix awkward wording Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:36     ` [PATCH 09/15] manpages: italicize command names in synopses Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:37     ` [PATCH 10/15] manpages: italicize command names Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:45     ` [PATCH 11/15] manpages: italicize git command names (which were in teletype font) Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:49     ` [PATCH 12/15] manpages: italicize gitk's name (where it was " Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:55     ` [PATCH 13/15] manpages: italicize nongit command names (if they are " Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  5:59     ` [PATCH 14/15] manpages: italicize git subcommand names (which were " Jonathan Nieder
2008-07-03  6:06     ` [PATCH 15/15] manpages: use teletype font for sample command lines Jonathan Nieder

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