From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-8.8 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,URIBL_BLOCKED autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A1BF4C433E0 for ; Wed, 3 Feb 2021 21:14:25 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 61D5F64F6C for ; Wed, 3 Feb 2021 21:14:25 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S232398AbhBCVOP (ORCPT ); Wed, 3 Feb 2021 16:14:15 -0500 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:58000 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S232268AbhBCVOO (ORCPT ); Wed, 3 Feb 2021 16:14:14 -0500 Received: from mail-qk1-x72d.google.com (mail-qk1-x72d.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::72d]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id EA4E7C061573 for ; Wed, 3 Feb 2021 13:13:33 -0800 (PST) Received: by mail-qk1-x72d.google.com with SMTP id 19so1254786qkh.3 for ; Wed, 03 Feb 2021 13:13:33 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=ttaylorr-com.20150623.gappssmtp.com; s=20150623; h=date:from:to:cc:subject:message-id:references:mime-version :content-disposition:in-reply-to; bh=xcLgv3fPVGyxNfZzh3u0FVz/1KnBEaIt9ys08o2rEow=; b=dyMkvG8qq7XAGB58ktfnIy5gg5kjcJL+M7Hw0t++SkfH8TGcKqgAD/q2oqL9wRQfap jWrUY3OYjdR8ySEcPfQ8OUQga49BL8kzo1mk+mCudIjcCjatlUN68PB59x9xVHBjMSQ8 ZY+gJc+0VUhjXZp31ImQPZGSDTXB8vCTaGjK/PMzxh0vZs+GTzE3QSb8C5ZkdUdvtGNN 5jpYvNZROm7Ei2wtqNIP5xVISqiEPt5QdqM9qtrO9XA6j4ppL3+nIjwG5KEL4GgxbErM zrsWxlMtNtR4fAVJoMRJ9q0uQSFDScdUDo3XDdZaP47JoSAo8yoDx9JfQyVzGjtkQR3s +ahA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:date:from:to:cc:subject:message-id:references :mime-version:content-disposition:in-reply-to; bh=xcLgv3fPVGyxNfZzh3u0FVz/1KnBEaIt9ys08o2rEow=; b=r4eCC30ryZu0Dftm/dKI73lk1bkuQw8OnTbAYNuSEizDH1yS0afMAHqUIx8EugdRMu 7Ok7I1JNrKImHX1RNHX6pUzE+HglxlAt3/ostflh3aBR9Pj9pIlUDaB+BaEwSLBmAnfS xgpUjreLaZkEUh6wFbPirqRy6MAK9XfOEVsRX9VBP3dWzxbzOJAp9qiOEfYB1rl/10Ca SQzgApI1/ZPAo/QZbgjtpoFiZGh/1hkCJujlKCmadgVrS47CK01OIMnIs9Iyxse5Jt1S 3RB4eF8yje82gWHGEs3Dm5pHyZSueW7g15kF5HyE52mfQMDC9Gkp/NIl7qW/oFXXD4Fg mA+Q== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM530h6nuqwIY/6Odq7rg8k2oF4Qm/uyaDPpzph8u75nIM5JxxAXGF sTEwFoMy3Yjl7a8O5ZE+EHAw7ihcjWDtZQ== X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJzIo8Vrp7KOjs072GacuDgdkyabxL/cJwsioRhbnFGRe7+6BUyefxrG+dySQCjXI9V5+u4QaQ== X-Received: by 2002:a37:e217:: with SMTP id g23mr4616899qki.283.1612386812996; Wed, 03 Feb 2021 13:13:32 -0800 (PST) Received: from localhost ([2605:9480:22e:ff10:3a5f:649:7bf7:4ac8]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id o88sm2406113qtd.79.2021.02.03.13.13.31 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Wed, 03 Feb 2021 13:13:32 -0800 (PST) Date: Wed, 3 Feb 2021 16:13:28 -0500 From: Taylor Blau To: Jeff King Cc: git@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc/git-branch: fix awkward wording for "-c" Message-ID: References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org On Wed, Feb 03, 2021 at 04:07:32PM -0500, Jeff King wrote: > The description for "-c" is hard to parse. I think the big issue is lack > of commas, but I've also reordered the words to keep the main focus > point of "instead of renaming, copy" together. > > Signed-off-by: Jeff King Much clearer, thanks. I'm only responding to acknowledge that it reads more clearly to me, too.