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Date:   Thu, 4 Feb 2021 02:21:59 +0100
From:   Robert Karszniewicz <avoidr@posteo.de>
To:     Taylor Blau <me@ttaylorr.com>
Cc:     Jeff King <peff@peff.net>, git@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc/git-branch: fix awkward wording for "-c"
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On Wed, Feb 03, 2021 at 04:13:28PM -0500, Taylor Blau wrote:
> On Wed, Feb 03, 2021 at 04:07:32PM -0500, Jeff King wrote:
> > The description for "-c" is hard to parse. I think the big issue is lack
> > of commas, but I've also reordered the words to keep the main focus
> > point of "instead of renaming, copy" together.
> >
> > Signed-off-by: Jeff King <peff@peff.net>
> 
> Much clearer, thanks. I'm only responding to acknowledge that it reads
> more clearly to me, too.

I second that, much better. Thanks.