From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Jakub Narebski Subject: Re: Git in a Nutshell guide Date: Mon, 19 Nov 2007 14:29:23 +0100 Organization: At home Message-ID: References: <1195477504.8093.15.camel@localhost> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7Bit To: git@vger.kernel.org X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Mon Nov 19 14:38:50 2007 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git-2@gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.176.167]) by lo.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.50) id 1Iu6pT-0005wO-7I for gcvg-git-2@gmane.org; Mon, 19 Nov 2007 14:38:24 +0100 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1752210AbXKSNiF (ORCPT ); Mon, 19 Nov 2007 08:38:05 -0500 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S1753585AbXKSNiE (ORCPT ); Mon, 19 Nov 2007 08:38:04 -0500 Received: from main.gmane.org ([80.91.229.2]:50044 "EHLO ciao.gmane.org" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752142AbXKSNiB (ORCPT ); Mon, 19 Nov 2007 08:38:01 -0500 Received: from list by ciao.gmane.org with local (Exim 4.43) id 1Iu6kQ-0002na-8I for git@vger.kernel.org; Mon, 19 Nov 2007 13:33:10 +0000 Received: from abwr246.neoplus.adsl.tpnet.pl ([83.8.241.246]) by main.gmane.org with esmtp (Gmexim 0.1 (Debian)) id 1AlnuQ-0007hv-00 for ; Mon, 19 Nov 2007 13:33:10 +0000 Received: from jnareb by abwr246.neoplus.adsl.tpnet.pl with local (Gmexim 0.1 (Debian)) id 1AlnuQ-0007hv-00 for ; Mon, 19 Nov 2007 13:33:10 +0000 X-Injected-Via-Gmane: http://gmane.org/ X-Complaints-To: usenet@ger.gmane.org X-Gmane-NNTP-Posting-Host: abwr246.neoplus.adsl.tpnet.pl Mail-Copies-To: Jakub Narebski User-Agent: KNode/0.10.2 Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: A few comments (from what I checked so far): 1. It is "man git-checkout" (or "git checkout --help"), not "man git checkout" 2. Instead of using 'verbatim' environment directly to show example CLI session it would be I think better to define verbatim-like environment for this ('example', 'commands', 'CLI', 'session'); perhaps replacing verbatim by lstlisting from the listings/lstlisting package for syntax highlighting. I'll send more comments after reading it in full... -- Jakub Narebski Warsaw, Poland ShadeHawk on #git