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From:   Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
To:     Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH 0/4] doc: fixes to gitcore-tutorial.txt
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Date:   Fri, 09 Dec 2016 15:13:36 -0800
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Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com> writes:

> This series of patches attempts to fix some minor mistakes in
> gitcore-tutorial.txt that I found while reading it.  They are all
> concerned with grammar and things like accidentally omitted words.

Grammar is not my forte, so even though I'll queue them as-is
because I didn't spot anything wrong in them and thought they are
all improvements, I'd appreciate somebody else to lend an eye or two
over them.

Thanks.