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From:   Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
To:     "Linus Arver via GitGitGadget" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/5] SubmittingPatches: reword awkward phrasing
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"Linus Arver via GitGitGadget" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com> writes:

> From: Linus Arver <linusa@google.com>
>
> Signed-off-by: Linus Arver <linusa@google.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/SubmittingPatches | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/SubmittingPatches b/Documentation/SubmittingPatches
> index b218e273570..b89678cedc3 100644
> --- a/Documentation/SubmittingPatches
> +++ b/Documentation/SubmittingPatches
> @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ Submitting Patches
>  
>  == Guidelines
>  
> -Here are some guidelines for people who want to contribute their code to this
> -software. There is also a link:MyFirstContribution.html[step-by-step tutorial]
> +Here are some guidelines for contributing back to this
> +project. There is also a link:MyFirstContribution.html[step-by-step tutorial]
>  available which covers many of these same guidelines.

Obviously better.  Thanks.