From: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
To: "Jean-Noël Avila via GitGitGadget" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com>
Cc: git@vger.kernel.org, "Jean-Noël Avila" <jn.avila@free.fr>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/3] doc: git-rev-parse: enforce command-line description syntax
Date: Tue, 20 Feb 2024 14:57:12 -0800 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <xmqqsf1mlp6f.fsf@gitster.g> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <17b0284c379e62a756e1bba008f4671f6afc0ad9.1708468374.git.gitgitgadget@gmail.com> ("Jean-Noël Avila via GitGitGadget"'s message of "Tue, 20 Feb 2024 22:32:52 +0000")
"Jean-Noël Avila via GitGitGadget" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com> writes:
> [verse]
> -'git rev-parse' [<options>] <args>...
> +'git rev-parse' [<options>] <arg>...
Good. The "or more" is signalled by the ellipsis, not "args" being
plural.
> ---short[=length]::
> +--short[=<length>]::
> Same as `--verify` but shortens the object name to a unique
> prefix with at least `length` characters. The minimum length
This same comment applies throughout this patch, but in other places
when we use <placeholder> in the option argument description, don't
we use the same <placeholder> in text as well? I am wondering if
the `length` (typeset in fixed-width) should become <length>. What
do other recent[*] documentation pages commonly do?
Side note: I say "recent" because rev-parse doc is one of
the oldest ones that did not get typesetting attention they
deserve, compared to more recent ones that got nitpicked
while they were written and updated.
> ---branches[=pattern]::
> ---tags[=pattern]::
> ---remotes[=pattern]::
> +--branches[=<pattern>]::
> +--tags[=<pattern>]::
> +--remotes[=<pattern>]::
> Show all branches, tags, or remote-tracking branches,
> respectively (i.e., refs found in `refs/heads`,
> `refs/tags`, or `refs/remotes`, respectively).
Ditto. We see `pattern` that may want to become <pattern> in the
description (after the post context of this hunk).
> ---glob=pattern::
> +--glob=<pattern>::
> Show all refs matching the shell glob pattern `pattern`. If
> the pattern does not start with `refs/`, this is automatically
> prepended. If the pattern does not contain a globbing
Ditto.
> ---exclude-hidden=[fetch|receive|uploadpack]::
> +--exclude-hidden=(fetch|receive|uploadpack)::
> Do not include refs that would be hidden by `git-fetch`,
> `git-receive-pack` or `git-upload-pack` by consulting the appropriate
> `fetch.hideRefs`, `receive.hideRefs` or `uploadpack.hideRefs`
Good.
> ---since=datestring::
> ---after=datestring::
> +--since=<datestring>::
> +--after=<datestring>::
> Parse the date string, and output the corresponding
> --max-age= parameter for 'git rev-list'.
Good, modulo possibly "date string" -> "<datestring>".
> ---until=datestring::
> ---before=datestring::
> +--until=<datestring>::
> +--before=<datestring>::
> Parse the date string, and output the corresponding
> --min-age= parameter for 'git rev-list'.
Ditto.
> -<args>...::
> +<arg>...::
> Flags and parameters to be parsed.
Good.
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-02-20 22:57 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 15+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-02-20 22:32 [PATCH 0/3] Doc placeholders Jean-Noël Avila via GitGitGadget
2024-02-20 22:32 ` [PATCH 1/3] doc: git-rev-parse: enforce command-line description syntax Jean-Noël Avila via GitGitGadget
2024-02-20 22:57 ` Junio C Hamano [this message]
2024-02-21 7:41 ` Jean-Noël Avila
2024-02-21 17:31 ` Junio C Hamano
2024-02-21 21:52 ` Jean-Noël AVILA
2024-02-21 22:36 ` Junio C Hamano
2024-02-22 9:07 ` Jean-Noël AVILA
2024-02-22 16:38 ` Junio C Hamano
2024-02-24 18:28 ` Jean-Noël AVILA
2024-02-20 22:32 ` [PATCH 2/3] doc: git-clone fix missing placeholder end carret Jean-Noël Avila via GitGitGadget
2024-02-20 22:39 ` Eric Sunshine
2024-02-20 23:01 ` Junio C Hamano
2024-02-20 22:32 ` [PATCH 3/3] doc: add some missing sentence dots Jean-Noël Avila via GitGitGadget
2024-02-20 22:50 ` Junio C Hamano
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