Re: [PATCH v2 2/2] doc: gitcvs-migration: rephrase “man page”

[Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>]

kristofferhaugsbakk@fastmail.com writes:

> From: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@khaugsbakk.name>
>
> Let’s change the phrasing around the `linkgit` while we’re visiting this
> file (see previous commit[1]).
>
> We use the section syntax to refer to man pages, so writing “man page”
> next to it is a bit redundant. We can be more concise and just lean on
> the preposition “in”.

Being succinct is better ;-).

> And in order to avoid this double “git”:
>
>     see `git config list` in git-config(1) ...
>
> We can rephrase to the subcommand, which is a typical pattern (config or
> option followed by “in git-command(1)”).

Again, being succinct is very good.

> † 1: Which also discusses why we do not change a similar phrasing
>      in gittutorial(7)
>
> Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@khaugsbakk.name>
> ---
>
> Notes (series):
>     v2:
>     • Just the “man page” change, which now comes after the --list/-l change
>     • Restructure commit message paragraph so that it leads with “section
>       syntax” and has a simpler structure.
>     • Footnote to remind what was discussed on the previous commit
>     v1: (combined --list/-l change and “man page” change)
>
>  Documentation/gitcvs-migration.adoc | 3 +--
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/gitcvs-migration.adoc b/Documentation/gitcvs-migration.adoc
> index 2883834b714..905d08cd5f9 100644
> --- a/Documentation/gitcvs-migration.adoc
> +++ b/Documentation/gitcvs-migration.adoc
> @@ -49,8 +49,7 @@ them first before running git pull.
>  ================================
>  The 'pull' command knows where to get updates from because of certain
>  configuration variables that were set by the first 'git clone'
> -command; see `git config list` and the linkgit:git-config[1] man
> -page for details.
> +command; see the subcommand `list` in linkgit:git-config[1] for details.
>  ================================
>  
>  You can update the shared repository with your changes by first committing