* PATCH] virtio-spec: small English/punctuation corrections
@ 2013-05-31 16:13 Luiz Capitulino
2013-06-03 1:27 ` Rusty Russell
0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: Luiz Capitulino @ 2013-05-31 16:13 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: rusty; +Cc: kvm
1. s/These are devices are/These devices are
2. s/Thefirst/The first
3. s/, Guest should/. Guest should
Signed-off-by: Luiz Capitulino <lcapitulino@redhat.com>
---
virtio-spec.lyx | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/virtio-spec.lyx b/virtio-spec.lyx
index 6e188d0..7e4ce71 100644
--- a/virtio-spec.lyx
+++ b/virtio-spec.lyx
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ description "Peripheral Component Interconnect; a common device bus. See\\\\htt
\end_inset
devices.
- These are devices are found in
+ These devices are found in
\emph on
virtual
\emph default
@@ -1558,7 +1558,7 @@ name "sub:Feature-Bits"
\end_layout
\begin_layout Standard
-Thefirst configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
+The first configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
The bits are allocated as follows:
\end_layout
@@ -2919,7 +2919,7 @@ For each ring, guest should then disable interrupts by writing VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_
INTERRUPT flag in avail structure, if required.
It can then process used ring entries finally enabling interrupts by clearing
the VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag or updating the EVENT_IDX field in
- the available structure, Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
+ the available structure. Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
then recheck the ring empty condition.
This is necessary to handle the case where, after the last check and before
enabling interrupts, an interrupt has been suppressed by the device:
--
1.8.1.4
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* Re: PATCH] virtio-spec: small English/punctuation corrections
2013-05-31 16:13 PATCH] virtio-spec: small English/punctuation corrections Luiz Capitulino
@ 2013-06-03 1:27 ` Rusty Russell
0 siblings, 0 replies; 2+ messages in thread
From: Rusty Russell @ 2013-06-03 1:27 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Luiz Capitulino; +Cc: kvm
Luiz Capitulino <lcapitulino@redhat.com> writes:
> 1. s/These are devices are/These devices are
> 2. s/Thefirst/The first
> 3. s/, Guest should/. Guest should
>
> Signed-off-by: Luiz Capitulino <lcapitulino@redhat.com>
> ---
> virtio-spec.lyx | 6 +++---
> 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
Thanks... I changed ", Guest" to ". The guest", and re-entered the
changes by hand to get change tracking.
Thanks,
Rusty.
>
> diff --git a/virtio-spec.lyx b/virtio-spec.lyx
> index 6e188d0..7e4ce71 100644
> --- a/virtio-spec.lyx
> +++ b/virtio-spec.lyx
> @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ description "Peripheral Component Interconnect; a common device bus. See\\\\htt
> \end_inset
>
> devices.
> - These are devices are found in
> + These devices are found in
> \emph on
> virtual
> \emph default
> @@ -1558,7 +1558,7 @@ name "sub:Feature-Bits"
> \end_layout
>
> \begin_layout Standard
> -Thefirst configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
> +The first configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
> The bits are allocated as follows:
> \end_layout
>
> @@ -2919,7 +2919,7 @@ For each ring, guest should then disable interrupts by writing VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_
> INTERRUPT flag in avail structure, if required.
> It can then process used ring entries finally enabling interrupts by clearing
> the VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag or updating the EVENT_IDX field in
> - the available structure, Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
> + the available structure. Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
> then recheck the ring empty condition.
> This is necessary to handle the case where, after the last check and before
> enabling interrupts, an interrupt has been suppressed by the device:
> --
> 1.8.1.4
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