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From: Rusty Russell <rusty@rustcorp.com.au>
To: Luiz Capitulino <lcapitulino@redhat.com>
Cc: kvm@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: PATCH] virtio-spec: small English/punctuation corrections
Date: Mon, 03 Jun 2013 10:57:53 +0930	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87ppw4t23q.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20130531121302.2d56dbe9@redhat.com>

Luiz Capitulino <lcapitulino@redhat.com> writes:
> 1. s/These are devices are/These devices are
> 2. s/Thefirst/The first
> 3. s/, Guest should/. Guest should
>
> Signed-off-by: Luiz Capitulino <lcapitulino@redhat.com>
> ---
>  virtio-spec.lyx | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

Thanks... I changed ", Guest" to ".  The guest", and re-entered the
changes by hand to get change tracking.

Thanks,
Rusty.

>
> diff --git a/virtio-spec.lyx b/virtio-spec.lyx
> index 6e188d0..7e4ce71 100644
> --- a/virtio-spec.lyx
> +++ b/virtio-spec.lyx
> @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ description "Peripheral Component Interconnect; a common device bus.  See\\\\htt
>  \end_inset
>  
>   devices.
> - These are devices are found in 
> + These devices are found in 
>  \emph on
>  virtual
>  \emph default
> @@ -1558,7 +1558,7 @@ name "sub:Feature-Bits"
>  \end_layout
>  
>  \begin_layout Standard
> -Thefirst configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
> +The first configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
>   The bits are allocated as follows:
>  \end_layout
>  
> @@ -2919,7 +2919,7 @@ For each ring, guest should then disable interrupts by writing VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_
>  INTERRUPT flag in avail structure, if required.
>   It can then process used ring entries finally enabling interrupts by clearing
>   the VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag or updating the EVENT_IDX field in
> - the available structure, Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
> + the available structure. Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
>   then recheck the ring empty condition.
>   This is necessary to handle the case where, after the last check and before
>   enabling interrupts, an interrupt has been suppressed by the device:
> -- 
> 1.8.1.4

      reply	other threads:[~2013-06-03  2:32 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 2+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2013-05-31 16:13 PATCH] virtio-spec: small English/punctuation corrections Luiz Capitulino
2013-06-03  1:27 ` Rusty Russell [this message]

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