From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mail-wm0-f47.google.com ([74.125.82.47]:47284 "EHLO mail-wm0-f47.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1751141AbdKHJem (ORCPT ); Wed, 8 Nov 2017 04:34:42 -0500 Date: Wed, 8 Nov 2017 10:34:38 +0100 From: Ingo Molnar To: Byungchul Park Cc: peterz@infradead.org, tglx@linutronix.de, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-block@vger.kernel.org, kernel-team@lge.com Subject: Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt Message-ID: <20171108093438.t5zjpsgealkiamlh@gmail.com> References: <1509344324-22399-1-git-send-email-byungchul.park@lge.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii In-Reply-To: <1509344324-22399-1-git-send-email-byungchul.park@lge.com> Sender: linux-block-owner@vger.kernel.org List-Id: linux-block@vger.kernel.org * Byungchul Park wrote: > I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can > have got much better english by others than me. > > But, > > I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it > starting with a better one. > > In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible. > > ----->8----- > From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Byungchul Park > Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900 > Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt > > The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it > to enhance its readability. > > Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park > --- > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------ Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and various grammar mistakes... Thanks, Ingo