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[96.255.20.42]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id af79cd13be357-7cd00f4e146sm555031685a.19.2025.05.12.07.31.12 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Mon, 12 May 2025 07:31:12 -0700 (PDT) Date: Mon, 12 May 2025 10:31:10 -0400 From: Gregory Price To: Randy Dunlap Cc: linux-cxl@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, kernel-team@meta.com, dave@stgolabs.net, jonathan.cameron@huawei.com, dave.jiang@intel.com, alison.schofield@intel.com, vishal.l.verma@intel.com, ira.weiny@intel.com, dan.j.williams@intel.com, corbet@lwn.net Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH v2 10/18] cxl: docs/linux/dax-driver documentation Message-ID: References: <20250430181048.1197475-1-gourry@gourry.net> <20250430181048.1197475-11-gourry@gourry.net> <43d957e0-f52b-4ba8-aa87-cfb8472b8b67@infradead.org> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-cxl@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <43d957e0-f52b-4ba8-aa87-cfb8472b8b67@infradead.org> On Sat, May 10, 2025 at 07:18:27PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote: > > > > +A Memory Device is a discrete base object that is not a port. While it the > > +physical device it belongs to may host an `endpoint`, this relationship is > > I have some parsing trouble with the sentence above. Maybe s/it the/the/. > Changed to the following: A Memory Device is a discrete base object that is not a port. While the physical device it belongs to may also host an `endpoint`, the relationship between an `endpoint` and a `memdev` is not captured in sysfs. Thanks for proofreading and feedback, sending a v3 today with the TODOs ripped out (can't circle back for a bit, better not to let this rot). ~Gregory