Re: [PATCH] docs/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst: grammar fixups

Randy Dunlap
2018-11-05T21:00:05Z

On 11/5/18 11:58 AM, Mike Rapoport wrote:
> From: Mike Rapoport <rppt@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
>
> Signed-off-by: Mike Rapoport <rppt@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
> Cc: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
> ---
>
> There was a couple of grammar fixes Randy suggested a while ago, but it
> seems I've never sent them out.
>
> Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst | 39 ++++++++++++++++---------------
> 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

Hi Mike,

one nit:

> @@ -121,8 +122,8 @@ Nodes
> Many multi-processor machines are NUMA - Non-Uniform Memory Access -
> systems. In such systems the memory is arranged into banks that have
> different access latency depending on the "distance" from the
> -processor. Each bank is referred as `node` and for each node Linux
> -constructs an independent memory management subsystem. A node has it's
> +processor. Each bank is referred as a `node` and for each node Linux

is referred to as a

> +constructs an independent memory management subsystem. A node has its
> own set of zones, lists of free and used pages and various statistics
> counters. You can find more details about NUMA in
> :ref:`Documentation/vm/numa.rst <numa>` and in

Reviewed-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>

thanks.
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~Randy