From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.2 (2018-09-13) on archive.lwn.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-6.0 required=5.0 tests=HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.2 Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [209.132.180.67]) by archive.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id BC7877D04D for ; Tue, 15 Jan 2019 00:37:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1727198AbfAOAhW (ORCPT ); Mon, 14 Jan 2019 19:37:22 -0500 Received: from ms.lwn.net ([45.79.88.28]:38606 "EHLO ms.lwn.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1726782AbfAOAhW (ORCPT ); Mon, 14 Jan 2019 19:37:22 -0500 Received: from lwn.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 934472E5; Tue, 15 Jan 2019 00:37:21 +0000 (UTC) Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2019 17:37:20 -0700 From: Jonathan Corbet To: Joel Nider Cc: Matthew Wilcox , Mike Rapoport , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] docs-rst: doc-guide: Minor grammar fixes Message-ID: <20190114173720.3e1d4c58@lwn.net> In-Reply-To: <1547450099-3534-1-git-send-email-joeln@il.ibm.com> References: <1547450099-3534-1-git-send-email-joeln@il.ibm.com> Organization: LWN.net MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Sender: linux-doc-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org On Mon, 14 Jan 2019 09:14:59 +0200 Joel Nider wrote: > While using this guide to learn the new documentation method, I saw > a few phrases that I felt could be improved. These small changes > improve the grammar and choice of words to further enhance the > installation instructions. > > Signed-off-by: Joel Nider > Acked-by: Matthew Wilcox > --- > v2: address Matthew's comment Applied, thanks. jon