From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.2 (2018-09-13) on archive.lwn.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.8 required=5.0 tests=DKIMWL_WL_HIGH,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_EF,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_NONE autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.2 Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [209.132.180.67]) by archive.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2B9ED7D2F0 for ; Thu, 15 Aug 2019 22:31:51 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1733111AbfHOWbu (ORCPT ); Thu, 15 Aug 2019 18:31:50 -0400 Received: from mail.kernel.org ([198.145.29.99]:35232 "EHLO mail.kernel.org" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1733095AbfHOWbu (ORCPT ); Thu, 15 Aug 2019 18:31:50 -0400 Received: from localhost (83-86-89-107.cable.dynamic.v4.ziggo.nl [83.86.89.107]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id EA09C206C1; Thu, 15 Aug 2019 22:31:48 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=kernel.org; s=default; t=1565908309; bh=JUGSZP1OX5849QbPzVQs+ETR+b8Pn+G4+/yEBBC8o+U=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:References:In-Reply-To:From; b=cRfJuEyWeJJuhd9QF7crXoOFqXFb+u+wQN6XqXf1A1x1kjJt2OFpxR0Zn6CilZfuI g4GvJ0Im/niVAq3tSBh6zxznh1Yt8PhcLV4iAGXGv08V7S9O/836zf21UbFSB5cfSw +uWad/+kXkvUhW72IUR2yLoAfpfPav4JWdYr7JRQ= Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2019 00:31:47 +0200 From: Greg Kroah-Hartman To: Randy Dunlap Cc: Jonathan Corbet , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, security@kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, Thomas Gleixner , Jiri Kosina , Mauro Carvalho Chehab Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation/admin-guide: Embargoed hardware security issues Message-ID: <20190815223147.GA28275@kroah.com> References: <20190725130113.GA12932@kroah.com> <20190725151302.16a3e0e3@lwn.net> <20190815212019.GB12041@kroah.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: User-Agent: Mutt/1.12.1 (2019-06-15) Sender: linux-doc-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org On Thu, Aug 15, 2019 at 03:12:34PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote: > On 8/15/19 2:20 PM, Greg Kroah-Hartman wrote: > >>> +The hardware security team will provide a per incident specific encrypted > >> s/per incident specific/incident-specific/ > > Fixed. And changed /a/ to /an/ > > eh? still should be /a per incident/ The sentence was changed to: The hardware security team will provide an incident-specific encrypted... is not "an" correct here? thanks, greg k-h