From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.8 required=3.0 tests=HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SIGNED_OFF_BY,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4D5DFC54FCC for ; Mon, 20 Apr 2020 23:04:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2E229206DD for ; Mon, 20 Apr 2020 23:04:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1726055AbgDTXD7 (ORCPT ); Mon, 20 Apr 2020 19:03:59 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:46212 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-FAIL-OK-FAIL) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1726006AbgDTXD7 (ORCPT ); Mon, 20 Apr 2020 19:03:59 -0400 Received: from ms.lwn.net (ms.lwn.net [IPv6:2600:3c01:e000:3a1::42]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 89FB8C061A0E; Mon, 20 Apr 2020 16:03:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: from lwn.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 419E8536; Mon, 20 Apr 2020 23:03:59 +0000 (UTC) Date: Mon, 20 Apr 2020 17:03:58 -0600 From: Jonathan Corbet To: Cristian Souza Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, willy@infradead.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v4] docs: admin-guide: Clarify sentences Message-ID: <20200420170358.7dafa798@lwn.net> In-Reply-To: <20200411010201.GA22706@darkstar> References: <20200411010201.GA22706@darkstar> Organization: LWN.net MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Sender: linux-doc-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org On Fri, 10 Apr 2020 22:02:01 -0300 Cristian Souza wrote: > Changes to make the text more formal and organized. The reasons are now cited and described at the same time. > Minor grammatical problems have also been fixed. > > Signed-off-by: Cristian Souza > --- > Changes in v2: > - Text more formal and organized > Changes in v3: > - Authors at the top of the file > - Removal of the source file in which the message is located > - All lines under 80 characters > Changes in v4: > - Diff against mainline > > Documentation/admin-guide/init.rst | 76 ++++++++++++++---------------- > 1 file changed, 36 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-) Applied, thanks. jon