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From: "Wu X.C." <bobwxc@email.cn>
To: Alex Shi <alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com>
Cc: harryxiyou@gmail.com, corbet@lwn.net, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 7/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough
Date: Thu, 4 Mar 2021 15:40:13 +0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20210304074012.GA14632@mipc> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <f71b3159-7ea4-c482-8383-7d113ef68511@linux.alibaba.com>

On Thu, Mar 04, 2021 at 03:23:43PM +0800, Alex Shi wrote:
> 
> 
> 在 2021/2/28 下午1:40, Wu XiangCheng 写道:
> > Improve language and grammar of zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Wu XiangCheng <bobwxc@email.cn>
> > ---
> >  .../zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst         | 141 +++++++++---------
> >  1 file changed, 74 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > index f509e077e1cb..c5442c356dad 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > @@ -1,145 +1,152 @@
> >  .. include:: ../disclaimer-zh_CN.rst
> >  
> >  :Original: :ref:`Documentation/process/6.Followthrough.rst <development_followthrough>`
> > -:Translator: Alex Shi <alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com>
> > +
> > +:Translator:
> > +
> > + 时奎亮 Alex Shi <alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com>
> > +
> > +:校译:
> > +
> > + 吴想成 Wu XiangCheng <bobwxc@email.cn>
> >  
> >  .. _cn_development_followthrough:
> >  
> >  跟进
> >  ====
> >  
> > -在这一点上,您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针,并且,随着您自己的工程技能
> > +此时,您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针,并且,随着您自己的工程技能
> 
> Seems there are many lines shorter than before, this may make new
> doc are bit more ugly and cause reader uncomfort, consider your change
> may widerly used or reference for long time. Line width control is
> very meanignful and valuable things.
> 
> Would you like try to refill all shorter lines, make context more
> pretty?
>
OK, good suggestion.
I'll try to fill the shorter lines or return at a word or punctuation.
But I won't fill a modified single line in a large paragraph, that may
cause many unnecessary line changes.

Thanks
Wu X.C.


  reply	other threads:[~2021-03-04  7:41 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 20+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2021-02-28  5:37 [PATCH v2 0/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve language in zh_CN/process/ Wu XiangCheng
2021-02-28  5:37 ` [PATCH v2 1/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/index.rst Wu XiangCheng
2021-03-01  8:37   ` Alex Shi
2021-02-28  5:38 ` [PATCH v2 2/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst Wu XiangCheng
2021-03-01  8:38   ` Alex Shi
2021-02-28  5:38 ` [PATCH v2 3/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst Wu XiangCheng
2021-03-01  8:39   ` Alex Shi
2021-02-28  5:38 ` [PATCH v2 4/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst Wu XiangCheng
2021-03-01  9:13   ` Alex Shi
2021-03-03 15:34     ` Wu X.C.
2021-03-04  7:03       ` Alex Shi
2021-02-28  5:39 ` [PATCH v2 5/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst Wu XiangCheng
2021-02-28  5:39 ` [PATCH v2 6/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/5.Posting.rst Wu XiangCheng
2021-02-28  5:40 ` [PATCH v2 7/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough Wu XiangCheng
2021-03-04  7:23   ` Alex Shi
2021-03-04  7:40     ` Wu X.C. [this message]
2021-03-04  8:05       ` Alex Shi
2021-02-28  5:40 ` [PATCH v2 8/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/7.AdvancedTopics Wu XiangCheng
2021-02-28  5:40 ` [PATCH v2 9/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/8.Conclusion.rst Wu XiangCheng
2021-03-01  8:37 ` [PATCH v2 0/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve language in zh_CN/process/ Alex Shi

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