From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-17.2 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER, INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,URIBL_BLOCKED, USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 70841C433E0 for ; Thu, 4 Mar 2021 07:41:49 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4653664E84 for ; Thu, 4 Mar 2021 07:41:49 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S233204AbhCDHlR (ORCPT ); Thu, 4 Mar 2021 02:41:17 -0500 Received: from [43.250.32.171] ([43.250.32.171]:6829 "EHLO email.cn" rhost-flags-FAIL-FAIL-OK-FAIL) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S233476AbhCDHkw (ORCPT ); Thu, 4 Mar 2021 02:40:52 -0500 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=email.cn; s=dkim; h=Date:From:To; bh=2WaLG0FLX0VmRdZorbJajqf9YjVMRmmjvLBDt VfzRc0=; b=aKBSBuRL3YTosA4ywecG+ySbufbd4E3z0EV3l0WFvkkpgZCtyhc5o 8RQP+YV3Emhf8epMQ5OwvIFisi6SelySSHcYzQTzKsHBxrP3wMl7JbSETVxbrfOO dpSs0CygvI9Oxt3Q9qBrjmKcPcS4RzzGx1aSqLmBFIJNek8Wm+XxVA= Received: from mipc (unknown [120.238.248.239]) by v_coremail2-frontend-1 (Coremail) with SMTP id LCKnCgB36tDdjkBg4UYPAA--.40448S2; Thu, 04 Mar 2021 15:40:15 +0800 (CST) Date: Thu, 4 Mar 2021 15:40:13 +0800 From: "Wu X.C." To: Alex Shi Cc: harryxiyou@gmail.com, corbet@lwn.net, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 7/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough Message-ID: <20210304074012.GA14632@mipc> References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit In-Reply-To: User-Agent: Mutt/1.10.1 (2018-07-13) X-CM-TRANSID: LCKnCgB36tDdjkBg4UYPAA--.40448S2 X-Coremail-Antispam: 1UD129KBjvJXoW7ZF1fKF1rGF13WFW7AFW8Zwb_yoW8ZFy3pF W7KF13Wa18Gry2k3y7Kw1xGF18t3Z7JF48Gw4Iv3s0vr95Jwsayry3t3s8WF93WryIyayr ZF4fKFW7CF1av37anT9S1TB71UUUUUUqnTZGkaVYY2UrUUUUjbIjqfuFe4nvWSU5nxnvy2 9KBjDU0xBIdaVrnRJUUUqSb7Iv0xC_tr1lb4IE77IF4wAFc2x0x2IEx4CE42xK8VAvwI8I cIk0rVWrJVCq3wA2ocxC64kIII0Yj41l84x0c7CEw4AK67xGY2AK021l84ACjcxK6xIIjx v20xvE14v26F1j6w1UM28EF7xvwVC0I7IYx2IY6xkF7I0E14v26r1j6r4UM28EF7xvwVC2 z280aVAFwI0_GcCE3s1l84ACjcxK6I8E87Iv6xkF7I0E14v26r4UJVWxJr1le2I262IYc4 CY6c8Ij28IcVAaY2xG8wAqx4xG64xvF2IEw4CE5I8CrVC2j2WlYx0E74AGY7Cv6cx26F4U Jr1UMcvjeVCFs4IE7xkEbVWUJVW8JwACjcxG0xvEwIxGrwCF04k20xvY0x0EwIxGrwCF04 k20xvE74AGY7Cv6cx26F4UJr1UMxC20s026xCaFVCjc4AY6r1j6r4UMI8I3I0E5I8CrVAF wI0_Jr0_Jr4lx2IqxVCjr7xvwVAFwI0_JrI_JrWlx4CE17CEb7AF67AKxVWUAVWUtwCIc4 0Y0x0EwIxGrwCI42IY6xIIjxv20xvE14v26r1j6r1xMIIF0xvE2Ix0cI8IcVCY1x0267AK xVWUJVW8JwCI42IY6xAIw20EY4v20xvaj40_Jr0_JF4lIxAIcVC2z280aVAFwI0_Jr0_Gr 1lIxAIcVC2z280aVCY1x0267AKxVWUJVW8JbIYCTnIWIevJa73UjIFyTuYvjxUUVyIUUUU U X-Originating-IP: [120.238.248.239] X-CM-SenderInfo: pere453f6hztlloou0/ Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org On Thu, Mar 04, 2021 at 03:23:43PM +0800, Alex Shi wrote: > > > 在 2021/2/28 下午1:40, Wu XiangCheng 写道: > > Improve language and grammar of zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst > > > > Signed-off-by: Wu XiangCheng > > --- > > .../zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst | 141 +++++++++--------- > > 1 file changed, 74 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-) > > > > diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst > > index f509e077e1cb..c5442c356dad 100644 > > --- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst > > +++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst > > @@ -1,145 +1,152 @@ > > .. include:: ../disclaimer-zh_CN.rst > > > > :Original: :ref:`Documentation/process/6.Followthrough.rst ` > > -:Translator: Alex Shi > > + > > +:Translator: > > + > > + 时奎亮 Alex Shi > > + > > +:校译: > > + > > + 吴想成 Wu XiangCheng > > > > .. _cn_development_followthrough: > > > > 跟进 > > ==== > > > > -在这一点上，您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针，并且，随着您自己的工程技能 > > +此时，您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针，并且，随着您自己的工程技能 > > Seems there are many lines shorter than before, this may make new > doc are bit more ugly and cause reader uncomfort, consider your change > may widerly used or reference for long time. Line width control is > very meanignful and valuable things. > > Would you like try to refill all shorter lines, make context more > pretty? > OK, good suggestion. I'll try to fill the shorter lines or return at a word or punctuation. But I won't fill a modified single line in a large paragraph, that may cause many unnecessary line changes. Thanks Wu X.C.