From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 804A1EB64DA for ; Mon, 10 Jul 2023 19:46:21 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S231201AbjGJTqU (ORCPT ); Mon, 10 Jul 2023 15:46:20 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:49984 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S229954AbjGJTqU (ORCPT ); Mon, 10 Jul 2023 15:46:20 -0400 Received: from dfw.source.kernel.org (dfw.source.kernel.org [139.178.84.217]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7416A136; Mon, 10 Jul 2023 12:46:19 -0700 (PDT) Received: from smtp.kernel.org (relay.kernel.org [52.25.139.140]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by dfw.source.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 109C2611C1; Mon, 10 Jul 2023 19:46:19 +0000 (UTC) Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 00CEFC433C7; Mon, 10 Jul 2023 19:46:17 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=linuxfoundation.org; s=korg; t=1689018378; bh=cWBikRqm4V+QGDEJy1FHTID+jQ9XAUzubNrpwx2bKHs=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:References:In-Reply-To:From; b=0A0Cm+OgFgclQaBEOZbd54lsQg2oEzc/LNuQNMVmTEQoGnlvCdfgTWNsM/IO9TpXH Ttgw/Ul0zhw6BK7+L3ME0ijRWgCKk2w9ImhjEG2h/1M+KqWLr9Qcx7SB82ADfFXCIz uAlDXdGvH6snGmGtzD4l6ayCQUIL3njtAGJcYnnw= Date: Mon, 10 Jul 2023 21:46:15 +0200 From: Greg KH To: Thorsten Leemhuis Cc: stable@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Sasha Levin , Jonathan Corbet Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH v1 3/3] docs: stable-kernel-rules: improve structure to optimize reading flow Message-ID: <2023071035-pristine-plus-0c11@gregkh> References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org On Mon, Jul 10, 2023 at 07:10:13PM +0200, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote: > Optimize the text flow to make things more straight forward to follow: > > * remove a subheading without real purpose > * after outlining the three options add a section that explains them in > more detail; move the "Following the submission" text that set in the > middle of this to a later place in the document > * a few small clarifications along the way All of this churn makes it really hard to determine what the end result is. Do you have a before/after result anywhere? Or maybe split this out into 3 different patches? thanks, greg k-h