From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1FCCFC001DB for ; Sat, 12 Aug 2023 11:04:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S237025AbjHLLDz (ORCPT ); Sat, 12 Aug 2023 07:03:55 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:38374 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S234822AbjHLLDy (ORCPT ); Sat, 12 Aug 2023 07:03:54 -0400 Received: from dfw.source.kernel.org (dfw.source.kernel.org [139.178.84.217]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4794AA3; Sat, 12 Aug 2023 04:03:58 -0700 (PDT) Received: from smtp.kernel.org (relay.kernel.org [52.25.139.140]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by dfw.source.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D9C826393E; Sat, 12 Aug 2023 11:03:57 +0000 (UTC) Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id E4D16C433C8; Sat, 12 Aug 2023 11:03:56 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=linuxfoundation.org; s=korg; t=1691838237; bh=kGynukD4iBSVIRmizx2B8LAiBQh3DBn0A3VuJCt+Eb0=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:References:In-Reply-To:From; b=zx0KJIv86xI0yRJz/LD88B+nQSHmtm0mKkcrRHkGI59+9fiqzKXA4Ao+QEbxzl1Ea GaLudH8q/rnl/TRDd21PSPGfokAo5Ca+Zq7jcgDvPnh7Myqyy+6neMqcK/2VnFxQdf 5UHZSTdSx0i6tp5Fdo0tU7YVf8pMMLtWHEHa0QBQ= Date: Sat, 12 Aug 2023 13:03:46 +0200 From: Greg KH To: Thorsten Leemhuis Cc: stable@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Sasha Levin , Jonathan Corbet Subject: Re: [PATCH v1 0/5] docs: stable-kernel-rules: improve structure and a few tweaks Message-ID: <2023081237-sulphate-fifteen-0c18@gregkh> References: <63380dd3-bce5-d295-ab14-13102f402c73@leemhuis.info> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <63380dd3-bce5-d295-ab14-13102f402c73@leemhuis.info> Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org On Sat, Aug 05, 2023 at 09:54:25AM +0200, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote: > [adding Sasha and Jon to the CC, seem I forget to do that on the cover > letter; sorry!] > > On 05.08.23 09:21, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote: > > When adding something to this document earlier I noticed that readers > > need to perform some back and forth to fully understand things; I also > > noticed a few other aspects that seemed somewhat odd for me with my > > background on writing and editing texts. > > > > Find attached a few patches to improve things. The first three are > > mainly moving text around to a structure which is somewhat clearer. They > > leave quite a few rough edges behind that are fixed in in the last patch > > of the series, which changes a few other changes as well; thx to the > > prep patches the diff should be relative straight-forward to understand. > > > > These patches are on-top of the following series that currently is in the > > driver-core-testing branch: > > https://lore.kernel.org/all/cover.1689056247.git.linux@leemhuis.info/ > > FWIW, in case anyone wonders how the text looks in the end, see: > > https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/stable-kernel-rules.txt > > https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/Everything%20you%20ever%20wanted%20to%20know%20about%20Linux%20-stable%20releases%20%e2%80%94%20The%20Linux%20Kernel%20documentation.html Looks very good, thanks! greg k-h