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From: Simon Horman <horms@kernel.org>
To: Kory Maincent <kory.maincent@bootlin.com>
Cc: netdev@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Jakub Kicinski <kuba@kernel.org>,
	Oleksij Rempel <o.rempel@pengutronix.de>,
	thomas.petazzoni@bootlin.com,
	"David S. Miller" <davem@davemloft.net>,
	Eric Dumazet <edumazet@google.com>,
	Paolo Abeni <pabeni@redhat.com>, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Subject: Re: [PATCH net-next] Documentation: networking: Fix missing PSE documentation issue
Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:09:29 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240912080929.GD572255@kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240911144711.693216-1-kory.maincent@bootlin.com>

On Wed, Sep 11, 2024 at 04:47:11PM +0200, Kory Maincent wrote:
> Fix a missing end of phrase in the documentation. It describes the
> ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW attribute, which was not fully explained.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Kory Maincent <kory.maincent@bootlin.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst | 5 +++--
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst b/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst
> index ba90457b8b2d..b1390878ba84 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst
> @@ -1801,8 +1801,9 @@ the PSE and the PD. This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022``
>  30.9.1.1.8 aPSEPowerClassification.
>  
>  When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW`` attribute identifies
> -This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.23 aPSEActualPower.
> -Actual power is reported in mW.
> +the actual power drawn by the C33 PSE. This option is corresponding to

nit: While we are here, perhaps we can also update the grammar.

     This attribute corresponds to...

> +``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.23 aPSEActualPower. Actual power is reported
> +in mW.
>  
>  When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_EXT_STATE`` attribute identifies
>  the extended error state of the C33 PSE. Possible values are:
> -- 
> 2.34.1
> 
> 

  parent reply	other threads:[~2024-09-12  8:09 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-09-11 14:47 [PATCH net-next] Documentation: networking: Fix missing PSE documentation issue Kory Maincent
2024-09-11 18:21 ` Oleksij Rempel
2024-09-12  8:09 ` Simon Horman [this message]
2024-09-12  8:59   ` Kory Maincent

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