From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (aws-us-west-2-korg-mail-1.web.codeaurora.org [10.30.226.201]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 0612C19DF62; Tue, 12 Nov 2024 03:03:58 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=10.30.226.201 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1731380639; cv=none; b=VYhly20WWf1NpBe4jqsKG4VU4tH521DgMMHHpbmlCVWVnZH9kU4Tt27/xIh26SoRk+t9A4MZccHRr1bLTyoiW/v4Vez38KbvZx1dk9OrHIQvTPcOe2RM3aDRjjfH0aIQaXP947nVJxjUhy7HkuoV6/5Bzr7y2kCnIPEkcseagC4= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1731380639; c=relaxed/simple; bh=zEuVEOYuXvXUfujcZ5GqwkoABFSLMXkGDWxAsMEEFyE=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:Message-ID:In-Reply-To:References: MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=KPQ4PKEAcpwzd/38+TCK7clpdu9L2MA3WOG5O6wH8rVAkDSQoG3L0KqNDymsBH8QA5AEHquIOCHv071jFh1PopvEXVmV+X0xoS9oi/YPDud7c0Sw2FztD8pG+Zv+HE0Z/YmyK5GHfiahmVYk6r6ZmJyTX+2Cmw16XTaT3dd16dA= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.b=Mv8wTLYb; arc=none smtp.client-ip=10.30.226.201 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.b="Mv8wTLYb" Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 7E022C4CECF; Tue, 12 Nov 2024 03:03:57 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=kernel.org; s=k20201202; t=1731380638; bh=zEuVEOYuXvXUfujcZ5GqwkoABFSLMXkGDWxAsMEEFyE=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:From; b=Mv8wTLYbB0/mepIUwLysLWZSQHKkWGgpvMXFU6/G85HdVDVTKuOTFLGFdZ8lHm1PN gjzljxT8jQfbK2oQi4AwJfeNeMe6gcl8LWLwDttcFpDTEysNKxnpOAGAWVp89XLm8R eVuH4Tpzdj1asuMS0pcb8r/DNNY59gjMasG1ZAHzYiJpjDjWdhHOpORXc+gqQEu2Vw 3BMkcFunnkZfW232l3DHw+y90hFNBw8+tOiaRSbMHJhrFUcLnijjpLF7Ab+Ul3HN7U AnYMdTA1ZyLFxpPSlf5Ht5f686gvLoH1V0TnzUGdNtZ4cWa4Pp+jOkiMpo1mBq1cMn PDgDB910rl6Bg== Date: Mon, 11 Nov 2024 19:03:56 -0800 From: Jakub Kicinski To: Abhinav Saxena Cc: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linuxfoundation.org, intel-wired-lan@lists.osuosl.org, netdev@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-rdma@vger.kernel.org, rds-devel@oss.oracle.com, Tony Nguyen , Przemek Kitszel , "David S . Miller" , Eric Dumazet , Paolo Abeni , Simon Horman , Jonathan Corbet , Saeed Mahameed , Leon Romanovsky , Tariq Toukan , Allison Henderson , Russell King , Dragos Tatulea , Rahul Rameshbabu Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] docs: net: Fix text in eth/intel, mlx5 and switchdev docs Message-ID: <20241111190356.0aefe1b9@kernel.org> In-Reply-To: <20241108202548.140511-1-xandfury@gmail.com> References: <20241108202548.140511-1-xandfury@gmail.com> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On Fri, 8 Nov 2024 13:25:47 -0700 Abhinav Saxena wrote: > diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst > index f355f0166f1b..df4b4c4a15d5 100644 > --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst > +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst > @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by > monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications. For example, a port moved into a > bond will see its upper master change. If that bond is moved into a bridge, > the bond's upper master will change. And so on. The driver will track such > -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by > +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by Are you sure? The first 'in' is for position, the second for topology. Equivalent to: movements to know in what position a port is in the overall topology by ^^ ^^ We can rephrase to avoid the double in: The driver will track such movements to know the position of a port within the overall topology by registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER. > registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER. -- pw-bot: cr