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[82.69.66.36]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id ffacd0b85a97d-4548ec6c79fsm6435208f8f.15.2026.05.08.11.26.09 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Fri, 08 May 2026 11:26:09 -0700 (PDT) Date: Fri, 8 May 2026 19:26:06 +0100 From: David Laight To: Shuah Khan Cc: Adrien Reynard , "Paul E. McKenney" , Frederic Weisbecker , Neeraj Upadhyay , Joel Fernandes , Josh Triplett , Boqun Feng , Uladzislau Rezki , Steven Rostedt , Mathieu Desnoyers , Lai Jiangshan , Zqiang , Jonathan Corbet , Greg Kroah-Hartman , "Rafael J. Wysocki" , Danilo Krummrich , David Howells , Paulo Alcantara , Masami Hiramatsu , "open list:READ-COPY UPDATE (RCU)" , "open list:DOCUMENTATION" , open list , "open list:DRIVER CORE, KOBJECTS, DEBUGFS AND SYSFS" , "open list:FILESYSTEMS [NETFS LIBRARY]" , "open list:FILESYSTEMS [NETFS LIBRARY]" , "open list:TRACING" Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/5] docs: fix repeated word 'that' across documentation Message-ID: <20260508192606.2423f50e@pumpkin> In-Reply-To: <1501caea-8cff-4968-aca6-e8d4b20e0e80@linuxfoundation.org> References: <20260508163759.16231-1-reynard.adrien.08@gmail.com> <1501caea-8cff-4968-aca6-e8d4b20e0e80@linuxfoundation.org> X-Mailer: Claws Mail 4.1.1 (GTK 3.24.38; arm-unknown-linux-gnueabihf) Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On Fri, 8 May 2026 11:15:28 -0600 Shuah Khan wrote: > On 5/8/26 10:37, Adrien Reynard wrote: > > Missing commit log in all your patches - I don't patch 1/5 in > my Inbox. > > > Signed-off-by: Adrien Reynard > > --- > > Documentation/RCU/rcu.rst | 2 +- > > Documentation/driver-api/driver-model/overview.rst | 2 +- > > Documentation/filesystems/netfs_library.rst | 2 +- > > Documentation/trace/histogram-design.rst | 2 +- > > Documentation/trace/histogram.rst | 2 +- > > 5 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) > > > > diff --git a/Documentation/RCU/rcu.rst b/Documentation/RCU/rcu.rst > > index bf6617b330a7..320ad3292b75 100644 > > --- a/Documentation/RCU/rcu.rst > > +++ b/Documentation/RCU/rcu.rst > > @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Frequently Asked Questions > > Just as with spinlocks, RCU readers are not permitted to > > block, switch to user-mode execution, or enter the idle loop. > > Therefore, as soon as a CPU is seen passing through any of these > > - three states, we know that that CPU has exited any previous RCU > > + three states, we know that CPU has exited any previous RCU > > The original intent might have been to say, "that cpu", so adding > the missing comma after the first "that" or change "that" to "the" > would make sense. ... I don't think adding a comma would be correct. The clause splits as 'we know that' 'that CPU' and the repeated 'that' is absolutely correct. Maybe 'that CPU' could be replaced by 'it'; but it can be difficult to work out what back references like 'it' refer to. You can re-order it, as (say): Therefore we know that as soon as a CPU is seen passing through any of these three states it has exited any previous RCU read-side critical sections. But just because some grammar book says you shouldn't have repeated words doesn't mean there aren't exceptions. The sign writer was doing a new sign for the 'Pig and Whistle'. Unfortunately the gaps between Pig and and and and and Whistle ended up visibly different. -- David