From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793667589; b=yOvhW655/7wWBnbVVv60685ys8s70U9HOFIfUEs/1Z3pmTAMb18CJKIGV9lF4ZtJW54B nT8wDsAvFC/7q1y25fKMlZJi20jhXFLF9XZ3qK1KXoiQEeUhkxiJiCr0ZxeGF2Dz1hs3R LbAzTgPQ5cizy1jHRl+8zDpyT8XT9ukO91cupgpoidlWAGcv5iEp/fg7SSbajG7t1Lgaj 7j0ly4iQuYf9pV7NTwDvl96cC3f4A3H9q0L6FkHz8HIyXY77J+/PWI6UcM/w4gEZjSEs6 J4QUyN4Ol50HE73ALBVoBMmrlLAtk/bcItm6NRl6lH6x8zTdMYKHlkYFXkxmNawbhlw== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793667589; h=Received:DKIM-Signature:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:X-Mailer: In-Reply-To:References:MIME-Version:Content-Transfer-Encoding; bh=YsqNsUR8tZ9cD/Ii/qDTf0zO0JWBiVUzSsKIvjwmL+I=; b=F6OgAGJjwM3ZHH76TKSaDJmeLWl9PT7bL3OCp0nKqrzwCc+RBSAoc0h8IATUQeL+f8T6 TgACiqlQzvV71sQ231561IW3XE0xez95pm823s8rsJnng36GDqRCSh2iqGWwndu4r5Xli Xn3s6x/FAFggk74c9aEOT3eOdDx9veTWGYw1l4K6qfwlI0DI13rE9oKX2qkFA7EElDikx 0cQNJBiB6BcDPKmQD2Ay8H6eAKdueALbNlaGpVzPq+GoBYxj78pHXMA9bT05lp7OZHR5I +vq9o/rlJD1dIh+2mlVMQEQ7cxQoxpLV0ekN2fa+uKpScgWw0uepUnIORV5lfUuKDVw== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=l+we6k8K; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (quasi.space.kernel.org [100.103.45.18]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7887E606A33B; Tue, 3 Nov 2026 00:59:49 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=l+we6k8K Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 026D81F00A15; Tue, 3 Nov 2026 00:59:48 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=kernel.org; s=k20260515; t=1793667589; bh=YsqNsUR8tZ9cD/Ii/qDTf0zO0JWBiVUzSsKIvjwmL+I=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:In-Reply-To:References; b=l+we6k8KCmW4BkvQe7SPxXlCNhaiRWMXTgksJgucs0e/v4ivZNSqhFA/8kidd7f6M 4li/y68cM1v9XNCcSH9KQIVy4HtIMYV1Y9Os/O2pZv4E/b/mIBBoOn5H6DZCTKEKhA lO03AJMI/43jsP2UkvOMY46hyDkJ5Ob8OEtfkEQA+cAzma8rzFuDIeRsjDPEoyPO5N l8gXJTOflG9u/8xcT11RVbcspDlCejlpp1cqpZDhbsk0NRdlz2enStKtTHT9x/rfPA snP31XQORX55zuNk9dsJMAnrbu/gQRar71FgzCAiDWFkKNukkHKaQKkptYhthadrlU a7sOrbmzvWY/g== From: SJ Park To: Andrew Morton Cc: Aveline Noir , Jonathan Corbet , Randy Dunlap , SJ Park , Shuah Khan , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, Manuel Ebner Subject: [PATCH v2 2/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat: fix pronoun agreement Date: Mon, 2 Nov 2026 16:59:32 -0800 Message-ID: <20261103005940.91432-3-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <20261103005940.91432-1-sj@kernel.org> References: <20261103005940.91432-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit From: Aveline Noir "converts it" refers to the access events, so I think it should be "them". Rewrap the paragraph while at it. Cc: Jonathan Corbet Cc: Shuah Khan Cc: Randy Dunlap Suggested-by: Manuel Ebner Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner Reviewed-by: SJ Park Signed-off-by: SJ Park --- Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst index 4a9db755a5265..7151ac118081d 100644 --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ enabled Enable or disable DAMON_STAT. -You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter as ``Y``. -Setting it as ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by +You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter to ``Y``. +Setting it to ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by ``CONFIG_DAMON_STAT_ENABLED_DEFAULT`` build config option. Note that this module (damon_stat) cannot run simultaneously with other @@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ estimated_memory_bandwidth Estimated memory bandwidth consumption (bytes per second) of the system. DAMON_STAT reads observed access events on the current DAMON results snapshot -and converts it to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per second. -The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter. Because -DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity rather -than accurate memory bandwidth. +and converts them to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per +second. The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter. +Because DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity +rather than accurate memory bandwidth. memory_idle_ms_percentiles -------------------------- -- 2.47.3