From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.3 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,NICE_REPLY_A,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,UNPARSEABLE_RELAY, USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6EAB0C433E6 for ; Mon, 1 Mar 2021 08:38:55 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 43FA264DE8 for ; Mon, 1 Mar 2021 08:38:55 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S233348AbhCAIip (ORCPT ); Mon, 1 Mar 2021 03:38:45 -0500 Received: from out30-44.freemail.mail.aliyun.com ([115.124.30.44]:44921 "EHLO out30-44.freemail.mail.aliyun.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S233335AbhCAIii (ORCPT ); Mon, 1 Mar 2021 03:38:38 -0500 X-Alimail-AntiSpam: AC=PASS;BC=-1|-1;BR=01201311R201e4;CH=green;DM=||false|;DS=||;FP=0|-1|-1|-1|0|-1|-1|-1;HT=e01e04420;MF=alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com;NM=1;PH=DS;RN=4;SR=0;TI=SMTPD_---0UPxZHnC_1614587862; Received: from IT-FVFX43SYHV2H.local(mailfrom:alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com fp:SMTPD_---0UPxZHnC_1614587862) by smtp.aliyun-inc.com(127.0.0.1); Mon, 01 Mar 2021 16:37:42 +0800 Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 1/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/index.rst To: Wu XiangCheng Cc: harryxiyou@gmail.com, corbet@lwn.net, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org References: From: Alex Shi Message-ID: <4cbfdc6e-1fca-fa12-e169-14f9b74c7039@linux.alibaba.com> Date: Mon, 1 Mar 2021 16:37:41 +0800 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.0; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.12.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Reviewed-by: Alex Shi 在 2021/2/28 下午1:37, Wu XiangCheng 写道: > Improve language and grammar of zh_CN/process/index.rst > > Signed-off-by: Wu XiangCheng > --- > Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst | 10 +++++----- > 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst > index 8051a7b322c5..39e9c88fbaa6 100644 > --- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst > +++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst > @@ -13,11 +13,11 @@ > 与Linux 内核社区一起工作 > ======================== > > -那么你想成为Linux内核开发人员？ 欢迎！ 不但从技术意义上讲有很多关于内核的知识 > -需要学，而且了解我们社区的工作方式也很重要。 阅读这些文章可以让您以更轻松地, > -麻烦最少的方式将更改合并到内核。 > +你想成为Linux内核开发人员吗？欢迎之至！在学习许多关于内核的技术知识的同时， > +了解我们社区的工作方式也很重要。阅读这些文档可以让您以更轻松的、麻烦更少的 > +方式将更改合并到内核。 > > -以下是每位开发人员应阅读的基本指南。 > +以下是每位开发人员都应阅读的基本指南： > > .. toctree:: > :maxdepth: 1 > @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ > management-style > embargoed-hardware-issues > > -这些是一些总体技术指南，由于缺乏更好的地方，现在已经放在这里 > +这些是一些总体性技术指南，由于不大好分类而放在这里： > > .. toctree:: > :maxdepth: 1 >