From: Easwar Hariharan <eahariha@linux.microsoft.com>
To: Wolfram Sang <wsa+renesas@sang-engineering.com>,
linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org
Cc: eahariha@linux.microsoft.com, Andi Shyti <andi.shyti@kernel.org>,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 5/5] docs: i2c: summary: rephrase paragraph explaining the figure
Date: Fri, 7 Jun 2024 11:17:49 -0700 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <760abc2e-d6d6-41a4-8691-09e4040dd1b4@linux.microsoft.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240607111726.12678-6-wsa+renesas@sang-engineering.com>
On 6/7/2024 4:17 AM, Wolfram Sang wrote:
> Use 'controller/target' and 'adapter/client' pairs consistently.
>
> Signed-off-by: Wolfram Sang <wsa+renesas@sang-engineering.com>
> ---
> Documentation/i2c/summary.rst | 6 +++---
> 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/i2c/summary.rst b/Documentation/i2c/summary.rst
> index b10b6aaafcec..1b5bc7ed46aa 100644
> --- a/Documentation/i2c/summary.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/i2c/summary.rst
> @@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ in a directory specific to the feature they provide, for example
> ``drivers/media/gpio/`` for GPIO expanders and ``drivers/media/i2c/`` for
> video-related chips.
>
> -For the example configuration in figure, you will need a driver for your
> -I2C adapter, and drivers for your I2C devices (usually one driver for each
> -device).
> +For the example configuration in the figure above, you will need one adapter
> +driver for the I2C controller, and client drivers for your I2C targets. Usually
> +one driver for each client.
>
> Outdated terminology
> --------------------
Similar feedback as for patch 4. I thought we agreed on using {local,
remote} target for in-line clarity.
Thanks,
Easwar
prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-06-07 18:17 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 12+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-06-07 11:17 [PATCH 0/5] docs: i2c: summary: update and use inclusive wording Wolfram Sang
2024-06-07 11:17 ` [PATCH 1/5] docs: i2c: summary: start sentences consistently Wolfram Sang
2024-06-07 18:13 ` Easwar Hariharan
2024-06-07 11:17 ` [PATCH 2/5] docs: i2c: summary: update I2C specification link Wolfram Sang
2024-06-07 18:14 ` Easwar Hariharan
2024-06-07 11:17 ` [PATCH 3/5] docs: i2c: summary: update speed mode description Wolfram Sang
2024-06-07 18:15 ` Easwar Hariharan
2024-06-07 11:17 ` [PATCH 4/5] docs: i2c: summary: document use of inclusive language Wolfram Sang
2024-06-07 18:13 ` Easwar Hariharan
2024-06-07 21:20 ` Wolfram Sang
2024-06-07 11:17 ` [PATCH 5/5] docs: i2c: summary: rephrase paragraph explaining the figure Wolfram Sang
2024-06-07 18:17 ` Easwar Hariharan [this message]
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