From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.2 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,NICE_REPLY_A,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,UNPARSEABLE_RELAY, URIBL_BLOCKED,USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E1F60C433DB for ; Thu, 4 Mar 2021 08:07:08 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9C4C464F04 for ; Thu, 4 Mar 2021 08:07:08 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S232459AbhCDIGV (ORCPT ); Thu, 4 Mar 2021 03:06:21 -0500 Received: from out30-42.freemail.mail.aliyun.com ([115.124.30.42]:50141 "EHLO out30-42.freemail.mail.aliyun.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S232303AbhCDIFw (ORCPT ); Thu, 4 Mar 2021 03:05:52 -0500 X-Alimail-AntiSpam: AC=PASS;BC=-1|-1;BR=01201311R111e4;CH=green;DM=||false|;DS=||;FP=0|-1|-1|-1|0|-1|-1|-1;HT=alimailimapcm10staff010182156082;MF=alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com;NM=1;PH=DS;RN=4;SR=0;TI=SMTPD_---0UQMKfJf_1614845109; Received: from IT-FVFX43SYHV2H.local(mailfrom:alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com fp:SMTPD_---0UQMKfJf_1614845109) by smtp.aliyun-inc.com(127.0.0.1); Thu, 04 Mar 2021 16:05:10 +0800 Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 7/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough To: "Wu X.C." Cc: harryxiyou@gmail.com, corbet@lwn.net, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org References: <20210304074012.GA14632@mipc> From: Alex Shi Message-ID: <7d27acd9-5817-1642-5234-42bad9fce97f@linux.alibaba.com> Date: Thu, 4 Mar 2021 16:05:09 +0800 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.0; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.12.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <20210304074012.GA14632@mipc> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org 在 2021/3/4 下午3:40, Wu X.C. 写道: > On Thu, Mar 04, 2021 at 03:23:43PM +0800, Alex Shi wrote: >> >> >> 在 2021/2/28 下午1:40, Wu XiangCheng 写道: >>> Improve language and grammar of zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst >>> >>> Signed-off-by: Wu XiangCheng >>> --- >>> .../zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst | 141 +++++++++--------- >>> 1 file changed, 74 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-) >>> >>> diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst >>> index f509e077e1cb..c5442c356dad 100644 >>> --- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst >>> +++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst >>> @@ -1,145 +1,152 @@ >>> .. include:: ../disclaimer-zh_CN.rst >>> >>> :Original: :ref:`Documentation/process/6.Followthrough.rst ` >>> -:Translator: Alex Shi >>> + >>> +:Translator: >>> + >>> + 时奎亮 Alex Shi >>> + >>> +:校译: >>> + >>> + 吴想成 Wu XiangCheng >>> >>> .. _cn_development_followthrough: >>> >>> 跟进 >>> ==== >>> >>> -在这一点上，您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针，并且，随着您自己的工程技能 >>> +此时，您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针，并且，随着您自己的工程技能 >> >> Seems there are many lines shorter than before, this may make new >> doc are bit more ugly and cause reader uncomfort, consider your change >> may widerly used or reference for long time. Line width control is >> very meanignful and valuable things. >> >> Would you like try to refill all shorter lines, make context more >> pretty? >> > OK, good suggestion. > I'll try to fill the shorter lines or return at a word or punctuation. > But I won't fill a modified single line in a large paragraph, that may > cause many unnecessary line changes. Uh, it still worth to do ... > > Thanks > Wu X.C. >