From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.3 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,NICE_REPLY_A,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,UNPARSEABLE_RELAY, USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D355AC433E0 for ; Mon, 1 Mar 2021 08:39:19 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A824064DEF for ; Mon, 1 Mar 2021 08:39:19 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S233327AbhCAIjQ (ORCPT ); Mon, 1 Mar 2021 03:39:16 -0500 Received: from out30-54.freemail.mail.aliyun.com ([115.124.30.54]:38594 "EHLO out30-54.freemail.mail.aliyun.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S233339AbhCAIiu (ORCPT ); Mon, 1 Mar 2021 03:38:50 -0500 X-Alimail-AntiSpam: AC=PASS;BC=-1|-1;BR=01201311R411e4;CH=green;DM=||false|;DS=||;FP=0|-1|-1|-1|0|-1|-1|-1;HT=e01e04400;MF=alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com;NM=1;PH=DS;RN=4;SR=0;TI=SMTPD_---0UPwsoVo_1614587843; Received: from IT-FVFX43SYHV2H.local(mailfrom:alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com fp:SMTPD_---0UPwsoVo_1614587843) by smtp.aliyun-inc.com(127.0.0.1); Mon, 01 Mar 2021 16:37:23 +0800 Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 0/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve language in zh_CN/process/ To: Wu XiangCheng Cc: Harry Wei , Jonathan Corbet , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org References: From: Alex Shi Message-ID: <7df50b3b-9990-a816-0f45-e7324a490106@linux.alibaba.com> Date: Mon, 1 Mar 2021 16:37:22 +0800 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.0; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.12.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Reviewed-by: Alex Shi 在 2021/2/28 下午1:37, Wu XiangCheng 写道: > Hi all, > > This set of patchs aims to polish context, improve on fluency, idiomatic > and grammar in some files in zh_CN/process/, and synchronize them with > original files. Some structure modifications need to rewrite the whole > sentences, so here are a lot of changes. > > * V0 > ** Add [Patch 1/9] ~ [Patch 5/9] > > * V1 > ** Add [Patch 6/9] ~ [Patch 9/9] > ** Modified [Patch 1/9] ~ [Patch 5/9] under Alex Shi's suggestions. > Previous discussions see: > > > * V2 > ** Modified [Patch 6/9] ~ [Patch 9/9] under Alex Shi's suggestions. > Previous discussions see: > > ** No other new change. > > Thanks! > > Wu XiangCheng (9): > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/index.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/5.Posting.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/7.AdvancedTopics > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/8.Conclusion.rst > > .../translations/zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst | 155 +++++---- > .../translations/zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst | 319 +++++++++--------- > .../zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst | 131 +++---- > .../translations/zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst | 262 +++++++------- > .../translations/zh_CN/process/5.Posting.rst | 223 ++++++------ > .../zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst | 141 ++++---- > .../zh_CN/process/7.AdvancedTopics.rst | 121 ++++--- > .../zh_CN/process/8.Conclusion.rst | 57 ++-- > .../translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst | 10 +- > 9 files changed, 739 insertions(+), 680 deletions(-) >