From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-10.2 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,NICE_REPLY_A, SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,UNPARSEABLE_RELAY,URIBL_BLOCKED,USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AB35CC433DB for ; Fri, 19 Feb 2021 03:24:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 647F864ED5 for ; Fri, 19 Feb 2021 03:24:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S229535AbhBSDXo (ORCPT ); Thu, 18 Feb 2021 22:23:44 -0500 Received: from out30-43.freemail.mail.aliyun.com ([115.124.30.43]:32777 "EHLO out30-43.freemail.mail.aliyun.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S229480AbhBSDXo (ORCPT ); Thu, 18 Feb 2021 22:23:44 -0500 X-Alimail-AntiSpam: AC=PASS;BC=-1|-1;BR=01201311R151e4;CH=green;DM=||false|;DS=||;FP=0|-1|-1|-1|0|-1|-1|-1;HT=e01e04394;MF=alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com;NM=1;PH=DS;RN=4;SR=0;TI=SMTPD_---0UOwOpnz_1613704981; Received: from IT-FVFX43SYHV2H.local(mailfrom:alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com fp:SMTPD_---0UOwOpnz_1613704981) by smtp.aliyun-inc.com(127.0.0.1); Fri, 19 Feb 2021 11:23:02 +0800 Subject: Re: [PATCH 0/5] docs/zh_CN: Improve language in zh_CN/process/ To: Wu XiangCheng Cc: harryxiyou@gmail.com, corbet@lwn.net, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org References: From: Alex Shi Message-ID: <80e38d8a-b141-386d-56b5-5644be41a799@linux.alibaba.com> Date: Fri, 19 Feb 2021 11:23:02 +0800 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.0; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.12.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Hi Xiangcheng, Thanks for polishing patchset, but i can find your patches in my email box. and even in lkml. Except https://lkml.org/lkml/2021/2/14/33 the first patch. Do I missed others? 在 2021/2/18 下午6:24, Wu XiangCheng 写道: > There are some errors in some files in zh_CN/process/, such as grammatical > errors, translation errors and improper use of words etc., which make it Could you like to point out each of specific incorrect words with reasons? Like the following incorrect I found in your patch: A, And end users, too, will often wish to change Linux to make it better suit their needs. +最终用户也常常希望修改Linux，使之年能更好地满足他们的需求。 I couldn't find a word means '年'/year in original context, do you? B, Contribution of code is the fundamental action which makes the whole process work. +- 代码的贡献是使整个流程顺畅的根本 the point of the process is 工作/workable, your transltion change it to process 顺畅/fluency, why? Thanks! > difficult for native speakers to understand. Many errors are caused by > machine translation without manual correction. > > This set of patchs aims to fix the above problems and synchronize them with > original files. Some structure modifications need to rewrite the whole > sentences, so here are a lot of changes. > > Wu XiangCheng (5): > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/index.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst > docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst > > .../translations/zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst | 146 ++++----- > .../translations/zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst | 296 +++++++++--------- > .../zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst | 120 +++---- > .../translations/zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst | 251 ++++++++------- > .../translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst | 10 +- > 5 files changed, 412 insertions(+), 411 deletions(-) >