From: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
To: Kit Dallege <xaum.io@gmail.com>
Cc: Shuah Khan <skhan@linuxfoundation.org>,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 3/3] docs: process: fix grammatical errors in 2.Process.rst
Date: Mon, 16 Mar 2026 07:43:45 -0600 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <871phjkhym.fsf@trenco.lwn.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20260315170521.63794-4-xaum.io@gmail.com>
Kit Dallege <xaum.io@gmail.com> writes:
> Fix five minor grammatical issues:
> - Add comma after introductory phrase "At that point"
> - Add comma before conditional "if at all possible"
> - Change "close to ready" to "close to being ready"
> - Add article "a" before "more extensive review"
> - Add article "the" before "volume can reach"
>
> Link: https://bugzilla.kernel.org/show_bug.cgi?id=214931
> Assisted-by: Claude:claude-opus-4-6
> Signed-off-by: Kit Dallege <xaum.io@gmail.com>
> ---
> Documentation/process/2.Process.rst | 10 +++++-----
> 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
Honestly, I don't see that any of these constitute an improvement to the
text.
Thanks,
jon
prev parent reply other threads:[~2026-03-16 13:43 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2026-03-15 17:05 [PATCH v2 0/3] docs: assorted documentation fixes Kit Dallege
2026-03-15 17:05 ` [PATCH v2 1/3] docs: kernel-doc: fix stale intel_audio.c path in examples Kit Dallege
2026-03-15 17:05 ` [PATCH v2 2/3] docs: sched-stats: fix misleading 'per-process' wording Kit Dallege
2026-03-16 13:44 ` Jonathan Corbet
2026-03-15 17:05 ` [PATCH v2 3/3] docs: process: fix grammatical errors in 2.Process.rst Kit Dallege
2026-03-16 13:43 ` Jonathan Corbet [this message]
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