From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from ms.lwn.net (ms.lwn.net [45.79.88.28]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7454539A053; Mon, 16 Mar 2026 13:43:52 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=45.79.88.28 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1773668633; cv=none; b=BN4InePvNN/lcD7Hzeus9VgaTCCAu0GqSdeWs6I4xh/dBbvAYJgkR5NTv2Jm0miACEk1kzhwI7cwxQQVZEXYn/sfHigpdvvrHBVzKBTkKeByCVn5d2zhtEhZZ6g81Zi8kXyKv6JxZ0mCN2PBjJRMP1EQ/UqU2O7KlEDLCvU3hHk= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1773668633; c=relaxed/simple; bh=bYyXwp+rK+gZb98xPJhdMkWot77PPZsh+L0PAeP2m7Y=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:Message-ID: MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=hnhXdEHw0nvZ2/c+pkgfkhZV/Z6GHzKF2o6Novq4/C8HPmpCLvnHsQaXPD+NOwRo2K6MsEMnx3v4Okhdfc0VqXWno9i9IVHNHe3fx0CcooavZSobT4goNm4ZpK2fXhYMUJ8WFgzORiISwLWKA2i6HMs9R/YsiqN4IcR2018vOxk= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=none dis=none) header.from=lwn.net; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=lwn.net; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=lwn.net header.i=@lwn.net header.b=C8PlHuRJ; arc=none smtp.client-ip=45.79.88.28 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=none dis=none) header.from=lwn.net Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=lwn.net Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=lwn.net header.i=@lwn.net header.b="C8PlHuRJ" DKIM-Filter: OpenDKIM Filter v2.11.0 ms.lwn.net 0233341206 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=lwn.net; s=20201203; t=1773668626; bh=AUuWDJN3+76AQ/ufOipsLc97Xbfv6w3dmIOiZhEOeSA=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:From; b=C8PlHuRJnzf9eVkolhAc+pdhwoJ6gHyCVNSqXv6+HAgO1DCB+t6s16xMK0QTW9Iyd yLqyvCtSq5Bu5b1p8vxjsrSQhIw8Eh0VuM7tl2mLIHHrGe9YnIeg1w5G7mqLliBtiZ zLVTPfqehkAa3x5CdBtHTNpqaqnNNLCU1xNvi2MPbMf6WqSiIaPvKPNvqor5FarrQm NwVGPwpGp/UEXYYselGeoGqF0BZaHHZ7edxxI13GgCjrvDauNZDYwUgIdC1cUwfmnI iL2jbPOzBv39Hy3KRfkfLA9rwLAS1pJUaq0g60JkvWKoIAL1c7QhfpoH9AxNKkgr2Y zTGwTUAdlNnTQ== Received: from localhost (c-71-229-227-126.hsd1.co.comcast.net [71.229.227.126]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange ECDHE (prime256v1) server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 0233341206; Mon, 16 Mar 2026 13:43:45 +0000 (UTC) From: Jonathan Corbet To: Kit Dallege Cc: Shuah Khan , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Randy Dunlap Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 3/3] docs: process: fix grammatical errors in 2.Process.rst In-Reply-To: <20260315170521.63794-4-xaum.io@gmail.com> References: <20260315170521.63794-1-xaum.io@gmail.com> <20260315170521.63794-4-xaum.io@gmail.com> Date: Mon, 16 Mar 2026 07:43:45 -0600 Message-ID: <871phjkhym.fsf@trenco.lwn.net> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Kit Dallege writes: > Fix five minor grammatical issues: > - Add comma after introductory phrase "At that point" > - Add comma before conditional "if at all possible" > - Change "close to ready" to "close to being ready" > - Add article "a" before "more extensive review" > - Add article "the" before "volume can reach" > > Link: https://bugzilla.kernel.org/show_bug.cgi?id=214931 > Assisted-by: Claude:claude-opus-4-6 > Signed-off-by: Kit Dallege > --- > Documentation/process/2.Process.rst | 10 +++++----- > 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) Honestly, I don't see that any of these constitute an improvement to the text. Thanks, jon