From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from ms.lwn.net (ms.lwn.net [45.79.88.28]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4322423909C; Wed, 13 May 2026 19:43:40 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=45.79.88.28 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1778701421; cv=none; b=HjLqzusxJLYAvrHW2wlp4Z/wn7zKMh/z7UCp5Bm/uIBb4o/vNgZTQj4fPV1VpYldzt8sa4Gqd1OxnaGqZrJHj0ROrrs77KepUuAQzOwmhkpAuaexCyC1qX5aIK9csyKgqFYwx8wm1xpQYcz7Q6Bdo6XIQr7DQHGsZOQUoHeOwt8= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1778701421; c=relaxed/simple; bh=NmcmlAz9U99SmeJGek26lRzqtG/8MaZ8Qixq914OrI0=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:Message-ID: MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=nRxlDduccqZLH7lCz9nLeDNyg2TRzkhJXCXYWetioFQse34713eGqiX3jLG0SNxD/lJmhAHob5T5MOpqdvb3eWNefFdfFherOrlzODJOO1KJz7lqiPtxyQTBiZHyobxugN1CSxPUnksyDk2X43jfS/XC3YCfPi9DLvvjyz6PG+E= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=none dis=none) header.from=lwn.net; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=lwn.net; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=lwn.net header.i=@lwn.net header.b=DW5y82hA; arc=none smtp.client-ip=45.79.88.28 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=none dis=none) header.from=lwn.net Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=lwn.net Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=lwn.net header.i=@lwn.net header.b="DW5y82hA" DKIM-Filter: OpenDKIM Filter v2.11.0 ms.lwn.net 6FD34410B5 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=lwn.net; s=20201203; t=1778701419; bh=gEfUr97x/O1UEkZyQ6LIL2eickoPNyB2l54Fbizh9uo=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:From; b=DW5y82hACNaDKsYL9js07prApG2+w5TKcZVmBodgFH8chjBZUMvo9rWFD8TNPvsVT Ow1sYTFPB5NoibSNv/Ku/LhxANe3nNXAeI94hLeDFhrM/+YxNEg4GDaE1TEq69cM3R 05ePKZ0AtSd6SG6WwuqEFK43AwK77Wz8TTPSPrgoA1KO3HZkwJrRlZEikgb0sEhU3d +2sEkOBW1bmG+TxVwhBYVeEyOwvuyfhndvf2uXY5k2KaTyt49VHLgsdZMmNPe8TM1f Q8E2xEubWZC8ONqC1x0OpXCeSupdj5hEj2y0AmzkxJtEwVQybIXQKc8ug8ilj+qCgq 3p/AwQFypeIBg== Received: from localhost (c-71-229-227-126.hsd1.co.comcast.net [71.229.227.126]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange ECDHE (prime256v1) server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 6FD34410B5; Wed, 13 May 2026 19:43:39 +0000 (UTC) From: Jonathan Corbet To: Chen-Shi-Hong , linux@leemhuis.info Cc: skhan@linuxfoundation.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Chen-Shi-Hong Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] docs: reporting-issues: replace "these advices" with "all of this advice" In-Reply-To: <20260513174009.1260-1-eric039eric@gmail.com> References: <20260512150431.894-1-eric039eric@gmail.com> <20260513174009.1260-1-eric039eric@gmail.com> Date: Wed, 13 May 2026 13:43:38 -0600 Message-ID: <874ikbksd1.fsf@trenco.lwn.net> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Chen-Shi-Hong writes: You are getting closer, a couple of other details... > "Advice" is an uncountable noun, so "these advices" is grammatically > incorrect. > > Replace it with "all of this advice" instead, which keeps the sentence > grammatical while also making it clear that it refers to the full set of > recommendations in the paragraph. > > Signed-off-by: Chen-Shi-Hong > > v3: > - resend against the original base as requested > - replace "these advices" directly with "all of this advice" > > v2: > - use "all of this advice" based on review feedback It is good to include the changes with each version, but it should go below the "---" line so that the maintainer doesn't have to edit it out at apply time. > --- > Documentation/admin-guide/reporting-issues.rst | 4 ++-- > > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) Also, please send new versions as a separate thread rather than as a response to a previous posting. Thanks, jon