From: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
To: Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu>, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu>,
Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation
Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2022 10:30:57 -0600 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <87wnarovum.fsf@meer.lwn.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20220826163458.1142-1-jmaselbas@kalray.eu>
Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu> writes:
> Remove duplicated words (the, at, be ...) across the whole documentation.
> In some cases the duplicated words are replaced by something that makes
> more sense, for instance: "be be" is replaced by "can be" when possible.
>
> There are likely more duplicated words to be found.
>
> CC: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
> CC: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
> CC: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
> CC: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
> Signed-off-by: Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu>
> ---
> in v3:
> as suggested by Randy Dunlap:
> - remove duplicated 'The the '
> - remove duplicated 'at at ' (some are replaced by 'at a ')
> - remove duplicated be, is, to, we, on ...
> in v2:
> - also remove the second 'the' in one sentence as suggested by
> Bagas Sanjaya
>
> Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst | 2 +-
> Documentation/admin-guide/kdump/vmcoreinfo.rst | 2 +-
> Documentation/admin-guide/media/vivid.rst | 2 +-
> Documentation/bpf/instruction-set.rst | 2 +-
> Documentation/bpf/map_cgroup_storage.rst | 4 ++--
> Documentation/core-api/cpu_hotplug.rst | 3 +--
> Documentation/devicetree/bindings/arm/arm,vexpress-juno.yaml | 4 ++--
> .../devicetree/bindings/arm/tegra/nvidia,tegra20-ahb.txt | 2 +-
When you redo the patch to reflect the other comments, please split the
devicetree changes into a separate patch. I don't handle devicetree
stuff, so that will need to go via a separate path.
Thanks,
jon
prev parent reply other threads:[~2022-08-29 16:31 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 14+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2022-08-26 9:52 [PATCH] Documentation: Fix repeated words in documentation Jules Maselbas
2022-08-26 12:45 ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-08-26 14:33 ` [PATCH v2] Remove duplicated 'the' across the whole documentation Jules Maselbas
2022-08-26 15:47 ` Randy Dunlap
2022-08-26 16:34 ` [PATCH v3] Remove duplicated words " Jules Maselbas
2022-08-26 16:40 ` Conor.Dooley
2022-08-26 16:50 ` Jules Maselbas
2022-08-26 16:56 ` [PATCH v4] " Jules Maselbas
2022-08-26 23:06 ` Randy Dunlap
2022-08-29 9:26 ` Jules Maselbas
2022-08-29 9:29 ` [PATCH v5] " Jules Maselbas
2022-08-29 17:23 ` Conor Dooley
2022-08-29 18:58 ` Randy Dunlap
2022-08-29 16:30 ` Jonathan Corbet [this message]
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