From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7576BECAAD5 for ; Mon, 29 Aug 2022 16:31:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S230501AbiH2QbU (ORCPT ); Mon, 29 Aug 2022 12:31:20 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:41258 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S231136AbiH2QbC (ORCPT ); Mon, 29 Aug 2022 12:31:02 -0400 Received: from ms.lwn.net (ms.lwn.net [IPv6:2600:3c01:e000:3a1::42]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D7AB2186C9; Mon, 29 Aug 2022 09:30:58 -0700 (PDT) Received: from localhost (unknown [IPv6:2601:281:8300:73:8b7:7001:c8aa:b65f]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id EB21A2E0; Mon, 29 Aug 2022 16:30:57 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Filter: OpenDKIM Filter v2.11.0 ms.lwn.net EB21A2E0 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=lwn.net; s=20201203; t=1661790658; bh=6S2NvRoZE/Y8A50MoD1XPsNF4V8uUQaelVt/mreMJRg=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:From; b=gNwEAPj165YacmV5Ngo8DAVSTlVaXOD9wnwNCqaBU/YBdgftaev80ngRiYcR7ZyO6 P/kSWojSF4TsBKmMDwxxbKuULBTGqUQvcLq0D1+AO9Vai9Zef5BstG2ytlTFgflGZm nhkdMFWbgIeMJ3YI0xfyAW5McHWc8uNDJd/BAOagr6p8KTrdT7S1R2uQBUehb3VR8Y 2ELd2FW07UkVdNxrcVZ2B+Vv4gzsvn+3YBzgmiVGFfX1a+/j72jtbIP3jGepJ327R1 11crHnaVQCMapwM5UpjnBFYN8g5cd9YCk41vXTYWBOCcKLd0ijp0riaY9slHt9VlHM JoZ5wacjNz2KA== From: Jonathan Corbet To: Jules Maselbas , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Cc: Jules Maselbas , Randy Dunlap , Bagas Sanjaya , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation In-Reply-To: <20220826163458.1142-1-jmaselbas@kalray.eu> References: <20220826143300.6794-1-jmaselbas@kalray.eu> <20220826163458.1142-1-jmaselbas@kalray.eu> Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2022 10:30:57 -0600 Message-ID: <87wnarovum.fsf@meer.lwn.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Jules Maselbas writes: > Remove duplicated words (the, at, be ...) across the whole documentation. > In some cases the duplicated words are replaced by something that makes > more sense, for instance: "be be" is replaced by "can be" when possible. > > There are likely more duplicated words to be found. > > CC: Randy Dunlap > CC: Bagas Sanjaya > CC: Jonathan Corbet > CC: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org > Signed-off-by: Jules Maselbas > --- > in v3: > as suggested by Randy Dunlap: > - remove duplicated 'The the ' > - remove duplicated 'at at ' (some are replaced by 'at a ') > - remove duplicated be, is, to, we, on ... > in v2: > - also remove the second 'the' in one sentence as suggested by > Bagas Sanjaya > > Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst | 2 +- > Documentation/admin-guide/kdump/vmcoreinfo.rst | 2 +- > Documentation/admin-guide/media/vivid.rst | 2 +- > Documentation/bpf/instruction-set.rst | 2 +- > Documentation/bpf/map_cgroup_storage.rst | 4 ++-- > Documentation/core-api/cpu_hotplug.rst | 3 +-- > Documentation/devicetree/bindings/arm/arm,vexpress-juno.yaml | 4 ++-- > .../devicetree/bindings/arm/tegra/nvidia,tegra20-ahb.txt | 2 +- When you redo the patch to reflect the other comments, please split the devicetree changes into a separate patch. I don't handle devicetree stuff, so that will need to go via a separate path. Thanks, jon