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Date:   Thu, 26 Jan 2023 21:36:01 +0200
From:   Mike Rapoport <rppt@kernel.org>
To:     Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc:     Andrew Morton <akpm@linux-foundation.org>,
        Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>,
        David Hildenbrand <david@redhat.com>,
        Johannes Weiner <hannes@cmpxchg.org>,
        Lorenzo Stoakes <lstoakes@gmail.com>,
        "Matthew Wilcox (Oracle)" <willy@infradead.org>,
        Mel Gorman <mgorman@suse.de>, Michal Hocko <mhocko@kernel.org>,
        Vlastimil Babka <vbabka@suse.cz>, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
        linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org,
        Michal Hocko <mhocko@suse.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v5 1/1] docs/mm: Physical Memory: add structure,
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On Thu, Jan 26, 2023 at 11:19:16AM -0700, Jonathan Corbet wrote:
> Mike Rapoport <rppt@kernel.org> writes:
> 
> > From: "Mike Rapoport (IBM)" <rppt@kernel.org>
> >
> > Add structure, introduction and Nodes section to Physical Memory
> > chapter.
> >
> > As the new documentation references core-api/dma-api and mm/page_reclaim,
> > add page labels to those documents.
> >
> > Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
> > Reviewed-by: Lorenzo Stoakes <lstoakes@gmail.com>
> > Acked-by: Michal Hocko <mhocko@suse.com>
> > Acked-by: Vlastimil Babka <vbabka@suse.cz>
> > Signed-off-by: Mike Rapoport (IBM) <rppt@kernel.org>
> 
> I've gone ahead and applied this, but I do have one little gripe...
> 
> Something like:
> 
> > +Reclaim control
> > +~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
> > +
> > +See also :ref:`Page Reclaim <page_reclaim>`.
> 
> Can also just be "See also Documentation/mm/page_reclaim.rst".  The
> right things will happen in the HTML output, readers of the plain-text
> will know immediately where to go, and we don't have to add the label
> clutter.
> 
> </gripe> :)

Do you want v6? ;-)
 
> Thanks,
> 
> jon

-- 
Sincerely yours,
Mike.