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From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
To: Quan Nguyen <quan@os.amperecomputing.com>
Cc: macro@orcam.me.uk, Lee Jones <lee@kernel.org>,
	Rob Herring <robh+dt@kernel.org>,
	Krzysztof Kozlowski <krzysztof.kozlowski+dt@linaro.org>,
	Jean Delvare <jdelvare@suse.com>,
	Guenter Roeck <linux@roeck-us.net>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	Derek Kiernan <derek.kiernan@xilinx.com>,
	Dragan Cvetic <dragan.cvetic@xilinx.com>,
	Arnd Bergmann <arnd@arndb.de>,
	Greg Kroah-Hartman <gregkh@linuxfoundation.org>,
	Thu Nguyen <thu@os.amperecomputing.com>,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, devicetree@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-hwmon@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	OpenBMC Maillist <openbmc@lists.ozlabs.org>,
	Open Source Submission <patches@amperecomputing.com>,
	Phong Vo <phong@os.amperecomputing.com>,
	thang@os.amperecomputing.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH v9 2/9] docs: hwmon: (smpro-hwmon) Add documentation
Date: Sat, 1 Oct 2022 19:56:56 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <Yzg5GM97kM6/Hw82@debian.me> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20220929094321.770125-3-quan@os.amperecomputing.com>

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On Thu, Sep 29, 2022 at 04:43:14PM +0700, Quan Nguyen wrote:
> diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> new file mode 100644
> index 000000000000..3a9b14dacf89
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> @@ -0,0 +1,101 @@
> +.. SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0-only
> +
> +Kernel driver Ampere(R)'s Altra(R) SMpro hwmon
> +==============================================
> +
> +Supported chips:
> +
> +  * Ampere(R) Altra(R)
> +
> +    Prefix: 'smpro'
> +
> +    Reference: Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification
> +
> +Author: Thu Nguyen <thu@os.amperecomputing.com>
> +
> +Description
> +-----------
> +This driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R) SoC's based on the
> +SMpro co-processor (SMpro).
> +The following sensor types are supported by the driver:
> +
> +  * temperature
> +  * voltage
> +  * current
> +  * power
> +
> +The SMpro interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
> +their values which are then exported to userspace by this driver.
> +
> +Usage Notes
> +-----------
> +
> +SMpro hwmon driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
> +
> +* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
> +* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
> +
> +The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro root fs folder.
> +There is one root folder for each SMpro instance.
> +
> +When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers
> +and return -ENXIO.
> +
> +Sysfs entries
> +-------------
> +
> +The following sysfs files are supported:
> +
> +* Ampere(R) Altra(R):
> +
> +============    =============   ======  ===============================================
> +Name            Unit            Perm    Description
> +temp1_input     milli Celsius   RO      SoC temperature
> +temp2_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
> +temp2_crit      milli Celsius   RO      SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
> +temp3_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
> +temp4_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
> +temp5_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
> +temp5_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp6_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
> +temp6_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp7_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
> +temp7_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp8_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
> +temp8_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp9_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
> +temp9_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp10_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
> +temp10_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp11_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
> +temp11_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp12_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
> +temp12_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +temp13_input    milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
> +in0_input       milli Volts     RO      Core voltage
> +in1_input       milli Volts     RO      SoC voltage
> +in2_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD1 voltage
> +in3_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD2 voltage
> +in4_input       milli Volts     RO      RCA VRD voltage
> +cur1_input      milli Amperes   RO      Core VRD current
> +cur2_input      milli Amperes   RO      SoC VRD current
> +cur3_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD1 current
> +cur4_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD2 current
> +cur5_input      milli Amperes   RO      RCA VRD current
> +power1_input    micro Watts     RO      Core VRD power
> +power2_input    micro Watts     RO      SoC VRD power
> +power3_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD1 power
> +power4_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD2 power
> +power5_input    micro Watts     RO      RCA VRD power
> +============    =============   ======  ===============================================
> +
> +Example::
> +
> +    # cat in0_input
> +    830
> +    # cat temp1_input
> +    37000
> +    # cat curr1_input
> +    9000
> +    # cat power5_input
> +    19500000
 
The documentation above can be improved (both grammar and formatting):

---- >8 ----

diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
index 3a9b14dacf8975..fb7b3665735bba 100644
--- a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
+++ b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
@@ -7,39 +7,39 @@ Supported chips:
 
   * Ampere(R) Altra(R)
 
-    Prefix: 'smpro'
+    Prefix: ``smpro``
 
-    Reference: Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification
+    Reference: `Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification`
 
 Author: Thu Nguyen <thu@os.amperecomputing.com>
 
 Description
 -----------
-This driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R) SoC's based on the
-SMpro co-processor (SMpro).
-The following sensor types are supported by the driver:
+The smpro-hwmon driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R)
+SoCs based on the SMpro co-processor (SMpro).  The following sensor metrics
+are supported by the driver:
 
   * temperature
   * voltage
   * current
   * power
 
-The SMpro interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
+The interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
 their values which are then exported to userspace by this driver.
 
 Usage Notes
 -----------
 
-SMpro hwmon driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
+The driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
 
-* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
-* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
+* ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
+* ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
 
-The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro root fs folder.
-There is one root folder for each SMpro instance.
+The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro rootfs folder, with one root
+directory for each instance.
 
-When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers
-and return -ENXIO.
+When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers and
+return ``-ENXIO``.
 
 Sysfs entries
 -------------
@@ -48,48 +48,49 @@ The following sysfs files are supported:
 
 * Ampere(R) Altra(R):
 
-============    =============   ======  ===============================================
-Name            Unit            Perm    Description
-temp1_input     milli Celsius   RO      SoC temperature
-temp2_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
-temp2_crit      milli Celsius   RO      SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
-temp3_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
-temp4_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
-temp5_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
-temp5_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp6_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
-temp6_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp7_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
-temp7_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp8_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
-temp8_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp9_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
-temp9_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp10_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
-temp10_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp11_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
-temp11_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp12_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
-temp12_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
-temp13_input    milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
-in0_input       milli Volts     RO      Core voltage
-in1_input       milli Volts     RO      SoC voltage
-in2_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD1 voltage
-in3_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD2 voltage
-in4_input       milli Volts     RO      RCA VRD voltage
-cur1_input      milli Amperes   RO      Core VRD current
-cur2_input      milli Amperes   RO      SoC VRD current
-cur3_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD1 current
-cur4_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD2 current
-cur5_input      milli Amperes   RO      RCA VRD current
-power1_input    micro Watts     RO      Core VRD power
-power2_input    micro Watts     RO      SoC VRD power
-power3_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD1 power
-power4_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD2 power
-power5_input    micro Watts     RO      RCA VRD power
-============    =============   ======  ===============================================
+  ============    =============  ======  ===============================================
+  Name            Unit           Perm    Description
+  ============    =============  ======  ===============================================
+  temp1_input     millicelsius   RO      SoC temperature
+  temp2_input     millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
+  temp2_crit      millicelsius   RO      SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
+  temp3_input     millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
+  temp4_input     millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
+  temp5_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
+  temp5_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp6_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
+  temp6_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp7_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
+  temp7_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp8_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
+  temp8_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp9_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
+  temp9_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp10_input    millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
+  temp10_crit     millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp11_input    millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
+  temp11_crit     millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp12_input    millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
+  temp12_crit     millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
+  temp13_input    millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
+  in0_input       millivolts     RO      Core voltage
+  in1_input       millivolts     RO      SoC voltage
+  in2_input       millivolts     RO      DIMM VRD1 voltage
+  in3_input       millivolts     RO      DIMM VRD2 voltage
+  in4_input       millivolts     RO      RCA VRD voltage
+  cur1_input      milliamperes   RO      Core VRD current
+  cur2_input      milliamperes   RO      SoC VRD current
+  cur3_input      milliamperes   RO      DIMM VRD1 current
+  cur4_input      milliamperes   RO      DIMM VRD2 current
+  cur5_input      milliamperes   RO      RCA VRD current
+  power1_input    microwatts     RO      Core VRD power
+  power2_input    microwatts     RO      SoC VRD power
+  power3_input    microwatts     RO      DIMM VRD1 power
+  power4_input    microwatts     RO      DIMM VRD2 power
+  power5_input    microwatts     RO      RCA VRD power
+  ============    =============  ======  ===============================================
 
-Example::
+  Example::
 
     # cat in0_input
     830

Thanks.

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  reply	other threads:[~2022-10-01 12:57 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 34+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-09-29  9:43 [PATCH v9 0/9] Add Ampere's Altra SMPro MFD and its child drivers Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 1/9] hwmon: smpro: Add Ampere's Altra smpro-hwmon driver Quan Nguyen
2022-10-01 12:59   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:47     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-10-26 15:00   ` Guenter Roeck
2022-10-27  3:39     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 2/9] docs: hwmon: (smpro-hwmon) Add documentation Quan Nguyen
2022-10-01 12:56   ` Bagas Sanjaya [this message]
2022-10-06  7:47     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 3/9] misc: smpro-errmon: Add Ampere's SMpro error monitor driver Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:53   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:44     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 4/9] docs: misc-devices: (smpro-errmon) Add documentation Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:56   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:46     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-30  6:07   ` kernel test robot
2022-09-30 13:13   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:46     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 5/9] misc: smpro-misc: Add Ampere's Altra SMpro misc driver Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:55   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:45     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 6/9] docs: misc-devices: (smpro-misc) Add documentation Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:56   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:45     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-10-01  4:11   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:47     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 7/9] dt-bindings: mfd: Add bindings for Ampere Altra SMPro MFD driver Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 8/9] mfd: Add Ampere's Altra SMpro " Quan Nguyen
2022-10-24 12:39   ` Lee Jones
2022-10-27  3:39     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 9/9] docs: ABI: testing: Document the Ampere Altra Family's SMpro sysfs interfaces Quan Nguyen
2022-09-30  9:38   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:46     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-30 19:41   ` kernel test robot

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