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Fri, 07 Feb 2025 19:06:51 -0800 (PST) Received: from archie.me ([103.124.138.155]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id d9443c01a7336-21f3687dddasm38069655ad.203.2025.02.07.19.06.49 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Fri, 07 Feb 2025 19:06:50 -0800 (PST) Received: by archie.me (Postfix, from userid 1000) id D25224208F47; Sat, 08 Feb 2025 10:06:47 +0700 (WIB) Date: Sat, 8 Feb 2025 10:06:47 +0700 From: Bagas Sanjaya To: Pranav Tyagi , Linux Documentation , Linux DRI Development , Linux Kernel Mailing List Cc: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linux.dev, skhan@linuxfoundation.org, David Airlie , Simona Vetter , Maarten Lankhorst , Maxime Ripard , Thomas Zimmermann , Jonathan Corbet Subject: Re: [PATCH] vgaarbiter: documentation grammar correction Message-ID: References: <20250207165325.3998-1-pranav.tyagi03@gmail.com> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="Zw9znROb1LsOQG2j" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20250207165325.3998-1-pranav.tyagi03@gmail.com> --Zw9znROb1LsOQG2j Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Fri, Feb 07, 2025 at 10:23:25PM +0530, Pranav Tyagi wrote: > Corrects the following grammatical issues in the VGA Arbiter documentatio= n: > - Fixes subject-verb agreement by changing "co-exists" to "co-exist" > - Corrects pluralization by changing "server" to "servers" > - Improves sentence structure for clarity >=20 +Cc: DRM folks. > Signed-off-by: Pranav Tyagi > --- > Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst | 6 +++--- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) >=20 > diff --git a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbi= ter.rst > index bde3c0afb059..d1e953712cc2 100644 > --- a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst > +++ b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst > @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ Section 7, Legacy Devices. > =20 > The Resource Access Control (RAC) module inside the X server [0] existed= for > the legacy VGA arbitration task (besides other bus management tasks) whe= n more > -than one legacy device co-exists on the same machine. But the problem ha= ppens > +than one legacy device co-exist on the same machine. But the problem hap= pens > when these devices are trying to be accessed by different userspace clie= nts > -(e.g. two server in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreo= ver, > +(e.g. two servers in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. More= over, > ideally, being a userspace application, it is not the role of the X serv= er to > control bus resources. Therefore an arbitration scheme outside of the X = server > is needed to control the sharing of these resources. This document intro= duces > @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ In-kernel interface > libpciaccess > ------------ > =20 > -To use the vga arbiter char device it was implemented an API inside the > +To use the vga arbiter char device, an API was implemented inside the > libpciaccess library. One field was added to struct pci_device (each dev= ice > on the system):: > =20 The diff looks OK. 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