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From: Gregory Price <gourry@gourry.net>
To: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Cc: linux-cxl@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, kernel-team@meta.com,
	dave@stgolabs.net, jonathan.cameron@huawei.com,
	dave.jiang@intel.com, alison.schofield@intel.com,
	vishal.l.verma@intel.com, ira.weiny@intel.com,
	dan.j.williams@intel.com, corbet@lwn.net
Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH v2 10/18] cxl: docs/linux/dax-driver documentation
Date: Mon, 12 May 2025 10:31:10 -0400	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <aCIGLu6fAOC8TPuJ@gourry-fedora-PF4VCD3F> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <43d957e0-f52b-4ba8-aa87-cfb8472b8b67@infradead.org>

On Sat, May 10, 2025 at 07:18:27PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> >  
> > +A Memory Device is a discrete base object that is not a port.  While it the
> > +physical device it belongs to may host an `endpoint`, this relationship is
> 
> I have some parsing trouble with the sentence above. Maybe s/it the/the/.
> 

Changed to the following:

  A Memory Device is a discrete base object that is not a port.  While the
  physical device it belongs to may also host an `endpoint`, the relationship
  between an `endpoint` and a `memdev` is not captured in sysfs.

Thanks for proofreading and feedback, sending a v3 today with the TODOs
ripped out (can't circle back for a bit, better not to let this rot).

~Gregory

  reply	other threads:[~2025-05-12 14:31 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 32+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2025-04-30 18:10 [RFC PATCH v2 00/18] CXL Boot to Bash Documentation Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 01/18] cxl: update documentation structure in prep for new docs Gregory Price
2025-05-11  7:34   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 02/18] cxl: docs/devices - device reference and uefi placeholder Gregory Price
2025-05-11  1:57   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 03/18] cxl: docs/platform/bios-and-efi documentation Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 04/18] cxl: docs/platform/acpi reference documentation Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:02   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 05/18] cxl: docs/platform/example-configs documentation Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 06/18] cxl: docs/linux - overview Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:06   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 07/18] cxl: docs/linux - early boot configuration Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:11   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 08/18] cxl: docs/linux - add cxl-driver theory of operation Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 09/18] cxl: docs/linux/cxl-driver - add example configurations Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 10/18] cxl: docs/linux/dax-driver documentation Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:18   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-05-12 14:31     ` Gregory Price [this message]
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 11/18] cxl: docs/linux/memory-hotplug Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:22   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 12/18] cxl: docs/allocation/dax Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 13/18] cxl: docs/allocation/page-allocator Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:28   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 14/18] cxl: docs/allocation/reclaim Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:31   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 15/18] cxl: docs/allocation/hugepages Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 16/18] cxl: docs/allocation/tiering Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 17/18] cxl: docs/use-cases Gregory Price
2025-04-30 18:10 ` [RFC PATCH v2 18/18] cxl: docs - add self-referencing cross-links Gregory Price
2025-05-11  2:54   ` Randy Dunlap
2025-05-11  9:14   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2025-04-30 23:15 ` [PATCH FIXUP] cxl: docs - fixup cedt.rst reference in access-coordinates Gregory Price

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