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From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
To: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
	Manuel Cortez <mdjesuscv@gmail.com>,
	linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Cc: corbet@lwn.net
Subject: Re: [PATCH] docs: fix typos and duplicated words across documentation
Date: Sun, 5 Apr 2026 12:01:12 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <adHsmPH7sehjq0AK@archie.me> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <8e489ff9-e9f8-4924-ad92-a1dbd6d33121@infradead.org>

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On Sat, Apr 04, 2026 at 08:16:05PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> This last one is a little awkward as is but dropping one "in" doesn't help it --
> it harms it (i.e., it's correct as is but could possibly be improved.)
> 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > index 2966b7122f05..948bce44ca9b 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by
> >  monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications.  For example, a port moved into a
> >  bond will see its upper master change.  If that bond is moved into a bridge,
> >  the bond's upper master will change.  And so on.  The driver will track such
> > -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by
> > +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by

I think it can be reworded as "The driver will track movements to locate
the port's position in the overall topology ...".

Thanks.

-- 
An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara

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  reply	other threads:[~2026-04-05  5:01 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2026-04-05  3:03 [PATCH] docs: fix typos and duplicated words across documentation Manuel Cortez
2026-04-05  3:16 ` Randy Dunlap
2026-04-05  5:01   ` Bagas Sanjaya [this message]
2026-04-06  3:03 ` [PATCH v2] " Manuel Cortez
2026-04-06  5:00   ` Randy Dunlap

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