From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.3 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN,FREEMAIL_FROM, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,NICE_REPLY_A,SPF_HELO_NONE, SPF_PASS,USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 141E8C433B4 for ; Mon, 17 May 2021 03:21:35 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DF61960FF2 for ; Mon, 17 May 2021 03:21:34 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S232040AbhEQDWt (ORCPT ); Sun, 16 May 2021 23:22:49 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:59864 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S231775AbhEQDWp (ORCPT ); Sun, 16 May 2021 23:22:45 -0400 Received: from mail-pj1-x1030.google.com (mail-pj1-x1030.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::1030]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C8CA8C061573 for ; Sun, 16 May 2021 20:21:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-pj1-x1030.google.com with SMTP id g6-20020a17090adac6b029015d1a9a6f1aso3767928pjx.1 for ; Sun, 16 May 2021 20:21:01 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=subject:to:cc:references:from:message-id:date:user-agent :mime-version:in-reply-to:content-language:content-transfer-encoding; bh=wr8StjvYX40daVfOB12K69metaDxXVZVUpkTMH4+xYk=; b=udtPh8PlBwWZbXqkFDvokTJT1yJzGO3jSwykF3//4zxEF2Q7dkHZsrctCa/EkqlU7Z pJy5BbN7gmj/1AARPvkGMUiVdq+d/oo/dmqG/hADq3JjEnCjOW+uvVKAIH0jHCKg/Y8M Snej8PtruQyogwjZ+nYug4xIAUpXQt0V0/7+zK2PRGcuxh2HLftCn/HLGN8KbZiRfteT udV7tfU5x9lyAtPtr2K4VpUlAADgUi+31qAWwrifCIvKoOgXHO6rE9x89CQ64cBIyQIO iDpBSVk+g/de07/O2fGwQOJdgrXjM94pPjiYtmvCqML3FgfUdUKjZ3l6DRQe7UBd/BFX MgGQ== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:subject:to:cc:references:from:message-id:date :user-agent:mime-version:in-reply-to:content-language :content-transfer-encoding; bh=wr8StjvYX40daVfOB12K69metaDxXVZVUpkTMH4+xYk=; b=ADUiqR5BC4hALrJ2WVtanAzBQqcFrq9R8K0t2EADDvPyc7S2odxyij5/DfiXqdD2NF lDEkXVw+dvwBdThpVCmZFKXFLjlh5fsz4IDYLFhyGnmp1YRg9yQHOusWXEyVOJ6pa6we qLW8aP/FQHxWaSn3udDx+gniepMVEZpd5cfuzwRU2OLmcTMRsdauOt8yXnnCURO5p7dL wRMlp/zD78IdeAP7chHQ4m4X7CB1Li4b340QKXKqgVFTgMImiwC/nHQYrlDoxH7Fk2cc WcNp5Bt2G9FH2uCTMVMwZYmV58UlIet4SnzxdRdh+A4kLSHB8qMw2NQG/6Js1MBZX9xf ReMQ== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM533pTkINiLgHjPdUNhfeft1GZXuzVkzqhTrko7jjXQ/ut7sjJbp7 h1eSMllo6BEcLoHLRk3/xlg= X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJw8uvH7nla0vnSUk3YgCAVeU7q5v/l76rjjbAjqwEQAnTYhbBfGjHDAzm+QcV9ra/DljGalbw== X-Received: by 2002:a17:902:a705:b029:ec:bd14:7825 with SMTP id w5-20020a170902a705b02900ecbd147825mr58739699plq.83.1621221661276; Sun, 16 May 2021 20:21:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [172.28.99.179] ([119.28.155.243]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id z7sm8895207pfb.93.2021.05.16.20.20.57 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Sun, 16 May 2021 20:21:00 -0700 (PDT) Subject: Re: [PATCH v6 1/3] docs/zh_CN: add core-api kernel-api.rst translation To: yanteng si Cc: Yanteng Si , Jonathan Corbet , Alex Shi , Huacai Chen , Jiaxun Yang , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, Puyu Wang , Wu XiangCheng , huangjianghui@uniontech.com References: <87f7bb59-cb85-de95-4e8d-72784686b9b9@gmail.com> From: Alex Shi Message-ID: Date: Mon, 17 May 2021 11:20:55 +0800 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.10.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org On 2021/5/17 上午9:55, yanteng si wrote: > Alex Shi 于2021年5月16日周日 上午11:30写道: >> >> >> >> On 2021/5/15 下午4:10, Yanteng Si wrote: >> >>> +安全框架 >>> +======== >>> + >>> +check the functions in security/security.c in kernel source code. >>> + :internal: >>> + >>> +check the functions in security/inode.c in kernel source code. >>> + :export: >>> + >>> +审计接口 >>> +======== >>> + >>> +check the functions in kernel/audit.c in kernel source code. >>> + :export: >>> + >>> +check the functions in kernel/auditsc.c in kernel source code. >>> + :internal: >>> + >>> +check the functions in kernel/auditfilter.c in kernel source code. >>> + :internal: >>> + >> >> Too verbose w/o much useful info, Is the following better? >> >> APIs in kernel code: kernel/audit.c, kernel/auitsc.c and kernel/auditfilter.c >> >> 该 APIs 在以下内核代码中 kernel/audit.c, kernel/auitsc.c and kernel/auditfilter.c > It looks great, but in some cases, sentences that are too long have > some difficulty with a new line, and they are not neat after the new > line. > For example:: > > 这些函数在以下内核代码中 include/asm-generic/bitops/instrumented-atomic.h, > include/asm-generic/bitops/instrumented-non-atomic.h and > include/asm-generic/bitops/instrumented-lock.h > ... > > how about:: > > 该API在以下内核代码中: > > kernel/audit.c > kernel/auitsc.c > kernel/auditfilter.c > > 该API在以下内核代码中: > > include/asm-generic/bitops/instrumented-atomic.h > include/asm-generic/bitops/instrumented-non-atomic.h > include/asm-generic/bitops/instrumented-lock.h Right split them into multiple lines looks better. > ? > > Thanks, > Yanteng >