From mboxrd@z Thu Jan  1 00:00:00 1970
From: Michael Witten <mfwitten@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 15 Apr 2011 17:40:53 +0000
Subject: Re: [PULL] Docs: README: Copyediting
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On Mon, 11 Apr 2011 06:22:57 +0000, Michael Witten wrote:

> I did some copyediting whilst looking through the README;
> this email contains a pull request as well as the inlined
> diff of all the changes squashed together.
>
> The changes apply cleanly to 960250952193db522b8ced336bf998bd7e8e4a31:
>
>   selinux: firmware - do not label files in runtime dir (2011-04-08 03:08:16 +0200)
>
> and are available here:
>
>   git://github.com/mfwitten/udev.git docs/README
>
> Squash them if desired.
>
>       Docs: README: `to replace' -> `replacing'
>       Docs: README: `,' -> `;'
>       Docs: README: Clean up a sentence
>       Docs: README: Use present tense
>       Docs: README: Add missing `and'
>       Docs: README: Remove commas and use subjective mood
>       Docs: README: Clean up `udev extras' requirements
>       Docs: README: Clarify configuration of existing devices
>       Docs: README: `does never apply' -> `never applies'
>       Docs: README: Flip sentence structure to improve wording
>       Docs: README: `set up' is the verb; `setup' is a noun
>       Docs: README: Add a comma to offset the modifier
>
>  README |   44 ++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
>  1 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
>
> [diff]

Would someone like to commit this?