From mboxrd@z Thu Jan  1 00:00:00 1970
From: Michael Witten <mfwitten@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 15 Apr 2011 17:41:50 +0000
Subject: Re: [PULL] Docs: udev.xml: Copyediting
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On Mon, 11 Apr 2011 06:31:30 +0000, Michael Witten wrote:

> I did some copyediting whilst looking through udev/udev.xml;
> this email contains a pull request as well as the inlined
> diff of all the changes squashed together.
>
> The changes apply cleanly to 960250952193db522b8ced336bf998bd7e8e4a31:
>
>   selinux: firmware - do not label files in runtime dir (2011-04-08 03:08:16 +0200)
>
> and are available here:
>
>   git://github.com/mfwitten/udev.git docs/udev.xml
>
> Squash them if desired.
>
>       Docs: udev.xml: Offset daemon name with commas
>       Docs: udev.xml: Remove commas (and unnecessary repetition)
>       Docs: udev.xml: `are' -> `is'; the subject is `Access'
>       Docs: udev.xml: Use present tense
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clarification through proper wording
>       Docs: udev.xml: `,' -> `;'
>       Docs: udev.xml: `key value' -> `key-value'
>       Docs: udev.xml: `,' -> `:'
>       Docs: udev.xml: Use `assignment' consistently
>       Docs: udev.xml: `comma-separated' is a better description
>       Docs: udev.xml: Remove unnecessary repitition
>       Docs: udev.xml: Add a few more words for context
>       Docs: udev.xml: Use `unless' for clarity
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clarify PROGRAM key
>       Docs: udev.xml: `a shell style' -> `shell-style'
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean `*' description
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean character range description
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of NAME assignment key
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of SYMLINK assignment key
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of ENV assignment key
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of RUN assignment key
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of LABEL assignment key
>       Docs: udev.xml: Add missing `.'
>       Docs: udev.xml: `which' -> `content of which'
>       Docs: udev.xml: `commandline' -> `command line'
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean up WAIT_FOR description
>       Docs: udev.xml: `a' -> `the'
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clean up introduction to substitutions.
>       Docs: udev.xml: Use normal sentence structure
>       Docs: udev.xml: Actually make a separate paragraph
>       Docs: udev.xml: Add comma
>       Docs: udev.xml: `char' -> `character'
>       Docs: udev.xml: `comma-separated' is a better description
>       Docs: udev.xml: Clarify through a change in word ordering
>       Docs: udev.xml: Improved word order
>       Docs: udev.xml: Fix dangling modifier
>
>  udev/udev.xml |  169 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------------
>  1 files changed, 86 insertions(+), 83 deletions(-)
>
> [diff]

Would someone like to commit this?