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From: luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com
To: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>,
	Wolfram Sang <wsa@kernel.org>, Peter Rosin <peda@axentia.se>,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording
Date: Mon,  8 Aug 2022 16:17:07 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20220808141708.1021103-9-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20220808141708.1021103-1-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>

From: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>

Improve wording in a couple sentences.

Signed-off-by: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>
---
 Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst b/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst
index 6b68b95cd427..d816a23b80f2 100644
--- a/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst
+++ b/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst
@@ -51,11 +51,10 @@ Google Pixel 3 phone for example::
 ``i2c-2`` is an I2C bus whose number is 2, and ``2-0049`` is an I2C device
 on bus 2 address 0x49 bound with a kernel driver.
 
-Terminologies
-=============
+Terminology
+===========
 
-First, let us define a couple of terminologies to avoid confusions in the later
-sections.
+First, let us define some terms to avoid confusions in the later sections.
 
 (Physical) I2C Bus Controller
 -----------------------------
@@ -117,7 +116,7 @@ Walk through Logical I2C Bus
 
 For the following content, we will use a more complex I2C topology as an
 example. Here is a brief graph for the I2C topology. If you do not understand
-this graph at the first glance, do not be afraid to continue reading this doc
+this graph at first glance, do not be afraid to continue reading this doc
 and review it when you finish reading.
 
 ::
-- 
2.34.1


  parent reply	other threads:[~2022-08-08 14:17 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 24+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-08-08 14:16 [PATCH 0/9] docs: i2c: rework I2C documentation, part II luca.ceresoli
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 1/9] docs: i2c: i2c-protocol: update introductory paragraph luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:03   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 2/9] docs: i2c: i2c-protocol,smbus-protocol: remove nonsense words luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:03   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 3/9] docs: i2c: i2c-protocol: remove unused legend items luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:05   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 4/9] docs: i2c: smbus-protocol: improve DataLow/DataHigh definition luca.ceresoli
2022-08-09  1:55   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-08-11 21:05   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 5/9] docs: i2c: instantiating-devices: add syntax coloring to dts and C blocks luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:07   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 6/9] docs: i2c: i2c-topology: fix incorrect heading luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:09   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 7/9] docs: i2c: i2c-topology: reorder sections more logically luca.ceresoli
2022-08-09  2:08   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-08-09  7:06     ` Luca Ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:09   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` luca.ceresoli [this message]
2022-08-11 21:13   ` [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording Wolfram Sang
2022-08-11 21:23     ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-12  7:13       ` Luca Ceresoli
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 9/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: fix hyperlinks luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:21   ` Wolfram Sang

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