linux-integrity.vger.kernel.org archive mirror
 help / color / mirror / Atom feed
From: Jarkko Sakkinen <jarkko.sakkinen@linux.intel.com>
To: amirmizi6@gmail.com
Cc: Eyal.Cohen@nuvoton.com, oshrialkoby85@gmail.com,
	alexander.steffen@infineon.com, robh+dt@kernel.org,
	mark.rutland@arm.com, peterhuewe@gmx.de, jgg@ziepe.ca,
	arnd@arndb.de, gregkh@linuxfoundation.org,
	devicetree@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-integrity@vger.kernel.org, oshri.alkoby@nuvoton.com,
	tmaimon77@gmail.com, gcwilson@us.ibm.com, kgoldman@us.ibm.com,
	ayna@linux.vnet.ibm.com, Dan.Morav@nuvoton.com,
	oren.tanami@nuvoton.com, shmulik.hagar@nuvoton.com,
	amir.mizinski@nuvoton.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH v1 2/5] char: tpm: Add check_data handle to tpm_tis_phy_ops in order to check data integrity
Date: Tue, 12 Nov 2019 22:22:47 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20191112202247.GA12877@linux.intel.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20191110162137.230913-3-amirmizi6@gmail.com>

On Sun, Nov 10, 2019 at 06:21:34PM +0200, amirmizi6@gmail.com wrote:
> From: Amir Mizinski <amirmizi6@gmail.com>
> 
> The current principles:
> - When sending command:
> 1. Host writes TPM_STS.commandReady
> 2. Host writes command
> 3. Host checks TPM received data correctly
> 4. if not go to step 1

You are probably talking about steps, right?

Please check the grammar and punctation e.g. "The current steps are
roughly done when sending a command".

> - When receiving data:
> 1. Host check TPM_STS.dataAvail is set
> 2. Host get data
> 3. Host check received data are correct.
> 4. if not Host write TPM_STS.responseRetry and go to step 1.
> 
> this commit is based on previous work by Christophe Richard

Sentences in English start with a capital letter and end with a full
stop.

This is completely lacking the description what the commit does.

/Jarkko

  reply	other threads:[~2019-11-12 20:23 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 12+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2019-11-10 16:21 [PATCH v1 0/5] add tpm i2c ptp driver amirmizi6
2019-11-10 16:21 ` [PATCH v1 1/5] char: tpm: Make implementation of read16 read32 write32 optional amirmizi6
2019-11-10 16:21 ` [PATCH v1 2/5] char: tpm: Add check_data handle to tpm_tis_phy_ops in order to check data integrity amirmizi6
2019-11-12 20:22   ` Jarkko Sakkinen [this message]
2019-11-10 16:21 ` [PATCH v1 3/5] char: tpm: rewrite "tpm_tis_req_canceled()" amirmizi6
2019-11-10 18:00   ` Jerry Snitselaar
2019-11-12  1:25     ` Stefan Berger
2019-11-10 16:21 ` [PATCH v1 4/5] dt-bindings: tpm: Add the TPM TIS I2C device tree binding documentaion amirmizi6
2019-11-14 19:10   ` Rob Herring
2019-11-24 18:02     ` Amir Mizinski
2019-11-10 16:21 ` [PATCH v1 5/5] char: tpm: add tpm_tis_i2c driver amirmizi6
  -- strict thread matches above, loose matches on Subject: below --
2019-12-02 13:01 [PATCH v1 0/5] add tpm i2c ptp driver amirmizi6
2019-12-02 13:01 ` [PATCH v1 2/5] char: tpm: Add check_data handle to tpm_tis_phy_ops in order to check data integrity amirmizi6

Reply instructions:

You may reply publicly to this message via plain-text email
using any one of the following methods:

* Save the following mbox file, import it into your mail client,
  and reply-to-all from there: mbox

  Avoid top-posting and favor interleaved quoting:
  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Posting_style#Interleaved_style

* Reply using the --to, --cc, and --in-reply-to
  switches of git-send-email(1):

  git send-email \
    --in-reply-to=20191112202247.GA12877@linux.intel.com \
    --to=jarkko.sakkinen@linux.intel.com \
    --cc=Dan.Morav@nuvoton.com \
    --cc=Eyal.Cohen@nuvoton.com \
    --cc=alexander.steffen@infineon.com \
    --cc=amir.mizinski@nuvoton.com \
    --cc=amirmizi6@gmail.com \
    --cc=arnd@arndb.de \
    --cc=ayna@linux.vnet.ibm.com \
    --cc=devicetree@vger.kernel.org \
    --cc=gcwilson@us.ibm.com \
    --cc=gregkh@linuxfoundation.org \
    --cc=jgg@ziepe.ca \
    --cc=kgoldman@us.ibm.com \
    --cc=linux-integrity@vger.kernel.org \
    --cc=linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org \
    --cc=mark.rutland@arm.com \
    --cc=oren.tanami@nuvoton.com \
    --cc=oshri.alkoby@nuvoton.com \
    --cc=oshrialkoby85@gmail.com \
    --cc=peterhuewe@gmx.de \
    --cc=robh+dt@kernel.org \
    --cc=shmulik.hagar@nuvoton.com \
    --cc=tmaimon77@gmail.com \
    /path/to/YOUR_REPLY

  https://kernel.org/pub/software/scm/git/docs/git-send-email.html

* If your mail client supports setting the In-Reply-To header
  via mailto: links, try the mailto: link
Be sure your reply has a Subject: header at the top and a blank line before the message body.
This is a public inbox, see mirroring instructions
for how to clone and mirror all data and code used for this inbox;
as well as URLs for NNTP newsgroup(s).