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Thu, 07 Nov 2024 16:52:16 -0800 (PST) Received: from server.roeck-us.net ([2600:1700:e321:62f0:329c:23ff:fee3:9d7c]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id d2e1a72fcca58-724079a403fsm2447659b3a.105.2024.11.07.16.52.15 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Thu, 07 Nov 2024 16:52:15 -0800 (PST) Sender: Guenter Roeck Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2024 16:52:14 -0800 From: Guenter Roeck To: Abhinav Saxena Cc: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linuxfoundation.org, linux-hwmon@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Jean Delvare , Jonathan Corbet Subject: Re: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation Message-ID: <07b90400-7f6b-478d-80af-c7e71ac205de@roeck-us.net> References: <20241107013849.47833-1-xandfury@gmail.com> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linux.dev List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20241107013849.47833-1-xandfury@gmail.com> On Wed, Nov 06, 2024 at 06:38:49PM -0700, Abhinav Saxena wrote: > Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation: > - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with > clearer "that specify the percentage at which" > - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct > verb agreement and adjective form > - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the > complex explanation into simpler parts > - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability > - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description > > No functional changes, documentation only. > > Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena Applied, after fixing the subject (which needs to include the affected driver). Thanks, Guenter