Re: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation

Guenter Roeck
2024-11-08T00:52:18Z

On Wed, Nov 06, 2024 at 06:38:49PM -0700, Abhinav Saxena wrote:
> Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation:
> - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with
> clearer "that specify the percentage at which"
> - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct
> verb agreement and adjective form
> - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the
> complex explanation into simpler parts
> - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability
> - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description
>
> No functional changes, documentation only.
>
> Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@gmail.com>

Applied, after fixing the subject (which needs to include the affected
driver).

Thanks,
Guenter