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[136.159.16.20]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id d9443c01a7336-21177e41890sm1172905ad.147.2024.11.06.17.38.59 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Wed, 06 Nov 2024 17:39:00 -0800 (PST) From: Abhinav Saxena To: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linuxfoundation.org, linux-hwmon@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Cc: Jean Delvare , Guenter Roeck , Jonathan Corbet , Abhinav Saxena Subject: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation Date: Wed, 6 Nov 2024 18:38:49 -0700 Message-Id: <20241107013849.47833-1-xandfury@gmail.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.34.1 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linux.dev List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation: - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with clearer "that specify the percentage at which" - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct verb agreement and adjective form - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the complex explanation into simpler parts - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description No functional changes, documentation only. Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena --- Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst | 9 +++++---- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst index 38e30fbd4806..53d32bf06b70 100644 --- a/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst +++ b/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst @@ -178,10 +178,11 @@ Writing an unsupported mode will result in an invalid parameter error. available on the F71858FG / F8000 if the fan channel is in RPM mode. * 2: Normal auto mode - You can define a number of temperature/fan speed trip points, which % the - fan should run at at this temp and which temp a fan should follow using the - standard sysfs interface. The number and type of trip points is chip - depended, see which files are available in sysfs. + You can define a number of temperature/fan speed trip points that specify + the percentage at which the fan should run at each temperature, and which + temperature sensor a fan should follow, using the standard sysfs interface. + The number and type of trip points are chip dependent - see the available + files in sysfs. Fan/PWM channel 3 of the F8000 is always in this mode! * 3: Thermostat mode (Only available on the F8000 when in duty cycle mode) -- 2.37.3