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Miller" , Eric Dumazet , Paolo Abeni , Simon Horman , Jonathan Corbet , Saeed Mahameed , Leon Romanovsky , Tariq Toukan , Allison Henderson , Russell King , Dragos Tatulea , Rahul Rameshbabu Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] docs: net: Fix text in eth/intel, mlx5 and switchdev docs Message-ID: <20241111190356.0aefe1b9@kernel.org> In-Reply-To: <20241108202548.140511-1-xandfury@gmail.com> References: <20241108202548.140511-1-xandfury@gmail.com> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linux.dev List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On Fri, 8 Nov 2024 13:25:47 -0700 Abhinav Saxena wrote: > diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst > index f355f0166f1b..df4b4c4a15d5 100644 > --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst > +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst > @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by > monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications. For example, a port moved into a > bond will see its upper master change. If that bond is moved into a bridge, > the bond's upper master will change. And so on. The driver will track such > -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by > +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by Are you sure? The first 'in' is for position, the second for topology. Equivalent to: movements to know in what position a port is in the overall topology by ^^ ^^ We can rephrase to avoid the double in: The driver will track such movements to know the position of a port within the overall topology by registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER. > registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER. -- pw-bot: cr