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([2804:14c:64:af90::1000]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id 46e09a7af769-72728549a33sm518922a34.2.2025.02.17.13.55.15 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Mon, 17 Feb 2025 13:55:17 -0800 (PST) From: Marcelo Moreira To: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, damon@lists.linux.dev, skhan@linuxfoundation.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linuxfoundation.org, ~lkcamp/patches@lists.sr.ht Subject: [PATCH] Docs/mm/damon: Fix spelling and grammar in monitoring_intervals_tuning_example.rst Date: Mon, 17 Feb 2025 18:54:31 -0300 Message-ID: <20250217215512.12833-1-marcelomoreira1905@gmail.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.48.1 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linux.dev List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit This patch fixes some spelling and grammar mistakes in the documentation, improving the readability. - multipled -> multiplied - idential -> identical - minuts -> minutes - efficieny -> efficiency Signed-off-by: Marcelo Moreira --- .../mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example.rst | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example.rst b/Documentation/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example.rst index 334a854efb40..7207cbed591f 100644 --- a/Documentation/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example.rst +++ b/Documentation/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example.rst @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Then, list the DAMON-found regions of different access patterns, sorted by the "access temperature". "Access temperature" is a metric representing the access-hotness of a region. It is calculated as a weighted sum of the access frequency and the age of the region. If the access frequency is 0 %, the -temperature is multipled by minus one. That is, if a region is not accessed, +temperature is multiplied by minus one. That is, if a region is not accessed, it gets minus temperature and it gets lower as not accessed for longer time. The sorting is in temperature-ascendint order, so the region at the top of the list is the coldest, and the one at the bottom is the hottest one. :: @@ -58,11 +58,11 @@ list is the coldest, and the one at the bottom is the hottest one. :: The list shows not seemingly hot regions, and only minimum access pattern diversity. Every region has zero access frequency. The number of region is 10, which is the default ``min_nr_regions value``. Size of each region is also -nearly idential. We can suspect this is because “adaptive regions adjustment” +nearly identical. We can suspect this is because “adaptive regions adjustment” mechanism was not well working. As the guide suggested, we can get relative hotness of regions using ``age`` as the recency information. That would be better than nothing, but given the fact that the longest age is only about 6 -seconds while we waited about ten minuts, it is unclear how useful this will +seconds while we waited about ten minutes, it is unclear how useful this will be. The temperature ranges to total size of regions of each range histogram @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ for sampling and aggregation intervals, respectively). :: The number of regions having different access patterns has significantly increased. Size of each region is also more varied. Total size of non-zero access frequency regions is also significantly increased. Maybe this is already -good enough to make some meaningful memory management efficieny changes. +good enough to make some meaningful memory management efficiency changes. 800ms/16s intervals: Another bias ================================= -- 2.48.1